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Crushed - But Whole

Crushed - but whole The castle floated endlessly: disturbing my reality; withholding all my certainty; deprived me of my dignity. The castle ment for future hope was within everybody’s scope Revealed my inner secret love For all to see my plans above Then desperately i failed to hide Instead of inside me – aside Ends of fear humility Would want to reach for destiny This castle could no longer be Attempts to void the best of me ‘till longing for the rest of man In peaceful sleep - my castle can

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