Crush

It's driving me round the bend
See on this girl I have this crush
I keep on hoping it will never end

What seems like a constant rush?
If only she was more than a friend                       
Because you know she's so lush

Whenever I'm in her presence 
Always makes my heart race                                                                     
Yeah she has such elegance

I can't take my eyes off her face
It's like she just has this essence 
That sends me into outer space
 
She has me in a complete blur
With those eyes, there ruby green
I’m always thinking of me and her

Yeah, I try to picture the scene
I ask myself would it ever occur
Well I suppose I can only dream

Written(2004) some bits of this 
were aoart of other poems
with you, breif encouter and she dont know
I was originaly going to scap as not as good as others
Again its about love passion romance check out others Ive wrote on
This subject   theres qut a few more in deph
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 1/13/2013 1:25:00 PM
Well.. if you keep dreaming nothing will ever happen, beautiful poem, love Elizabeth
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Date: 1/12/2013 2:50:00 PM
yes a crush is always so graceful with such attraction to details, very much enjoyed this write,..~always & forever~PD
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Date: 1/4/2013 11:19:00 AM
Dreams can come true ...... I like it! - Well written , David. - xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/4/2013 7:43:00 AM
Love, one way or the other, is inspiring. Light & Love
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