Andrea Dietrich Poet Verse

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Crunchy

Craving cheese Doritos,
Crispy chips and Cheetos.
Caramel apples with 
Cashew coating will do!
Cooking some rock candy
Captain Crunch could cherish!
Cancel the celery!



(Just dreaming of my childhood days. Sure can't eat this way any more!)
Aug. 23, 2016

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Paul Callus August 26, 2016 at 1:56 PM You should have taken up advertising, Andrea - "Munch with a Crunch"!! Congrats on this fine win:) Regards // paul

Kim Merryman August 26, 2016 at 12:14 PM I'm getting hungry reading this again. Love that rebellious last line, Andrea! Congrats for your win in my contest! Blessings!

CayCay Godwin August 26, 2016 at 6:31 AM Oh, Sweetie - I wish I could help with this, but there are only 2 on your list I care for: the Doritos (cheese) and, actually, the celery! Your poems as cute as cute can be and good start on venting! I've been away from Soup, but I haven't been gone, k? Love ya ... CayCay

Anne-Lise Andresen August 26, 2016 at 4:19 AM - Congratulations on your winning poems, Andrea :) - hugs and :)

Kai Michael Neumann August 26, 2016 at 3:20 AM I had too many Doritos in bed last night. Tried to balance with pretzels and yoghurt and cherries from a glass of my childhood memories. Does all that count as five fruit a day? PS: waistline not responding adequately. Congratulations, Kai

Joanna Daniel August 26, 2016 at 1:17 AM Wonderful:) Congratulations:)

Viv Wigley August 26, 2016 at 12:35 AM Congrats, Andrea, love the last line- yeah, to hell with the veggies! Woo! Viv x

Sandra Haight August 25, 2016 at 7:28 PM Yum, Andrea! I love crunchy too! Great poem, and congratulations on your fine win in the 'Pleiades C' contest! Hugs, Sandra

Beautiful Scars August 25, 2016 at 5:18 PM Andrea, back with my congrats lovely lady :)-luloo

Joseph May August 25, 2016 at 5:12 PM I was hoping to see this higher on the list...Congrats on your win ...

Jan Allison August 25, 2016 at 5:05 PM Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen August 25, 2016 at 5:34 AM - I like your suggestion, Andrea - Unique - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Quigley August 24, 2016 at 8:27 PM A fun one!

Agnes Krampe August 24, 2016 at 6:16 PM Lots of crunchy C's outside and inside - very nicely done!

Tim Smith August 24, 2016 at 3:45 PM Now I need something to eat : )

Connie Marcum Wong August 24, 2016 at 1:58 PM A clever one Andrea. I love some of the things you mention and sometimes I give in and have them still. Second line being my favorite crunches. I am sure this will score! ; )

Frederic Parker August 24, 2016 at 1:12 PM what.. no hostess snowballs covered in coconut...

Charlie Smith August 24, 2016 at 11:46 AM Yum! what about coconut cream...sorry not crunch enough. Hungry I am...

Sunita U.D Palawon August 24, 2016 at 11:34 AM Hmmm...tempting. Surely one is allowed one bite (pour passer l'envie, voyons!):D

Beautiful Scars August 24, 2016 at 10:45 AM Love this take on the contest lady! It reminds me of Ella she sure LOVES her Ranch Doritos! lol good luck :)-luloo

Jean Murray August 24, 2016 at 10:34 AM Your cruchy C is causing salavation Andrea.

Jan Allison August 24, 2016 at 9:43 AM Made me feel really peckish Andrea - I think Kim will love this:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux August 24, 2016 at 8:52 AM Yum yum!

Sara Chansarkar August 24, 2016 at 8:32 AM Oh I love crunch in every shape or form too:)Lovely lines Andrea!

Joseph May August 24, 2016 at 8:15 AM Love your crunches Andrea...A #1 write...

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