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Crumpled Thoughts Down the Pan

my poems are crap written on toilet tissue waste bin overflows I straighten each sheet these words will get flushed away perfect recycling! Crumpled Thoughts Poetry Contest Sponsored by John Lawless 01/14/21

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/19/2021 12:37:00 AM

You flush'em, I saved all of mine until I could type them up. Even though a lot of them were horrible; I did manage to salvage a few. Love it!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/17/2021 10:28:00 AM

Great humor, well done Jan, recycled or not that paper is precious to more than a few. VERY well penned. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/16/2021 6:38:00 PM

I can't beat Caren's comment. See below... lol. ~ gw

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/16/2021 1:04:00 PM

:) I'm trying to imagine writing poetry on toilet tissue. Hilarious, Jan!

Mark Koplin

Date: 1/16/2021 1:01:00 PM

Maybe there are some fish out there enjoying your well written crap. LOL

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/15/2021 8:58:00 PM

It started out crappy and got better and wetter!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/15/2021 5:56:00 AM

lol you kill me crumpled or not they are worth a mint, to the right person, Lovely humor, you've been star pinned my girl, Have a blessed day.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/15/2021 11:25:00 AM

lol Vienna i doubt anyone would be interested in my scrawls but i would be flushed with success when i eventually do a book and sell well one or two copies lol:-) hugs jan xx

Elaine George

Date: 1/15/2021 3:23:00 AM

Yes! I understand this all too well. BRILLANT WRITING, Jan ~ Elaine

Jan Allison
Date: 1/15/2021 11:22:00 AM

thanks Elaine:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/15/2021 1:58:00 AM

- I still find your poems at the top of the winner list :) - If we did not like them ... no one would read them ... I love your humor :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 1/15/2021 11:21:00 AM

a bit of tongue in cheek humour lol, got to laugh at such difficult times in the world, happy weekend my friend:-) hugs jan xx