Crumpled Sheets

A pleasant sleep eludes her bed of stars. Her crumpled sheets in twisted heap aloof. The restless mind of mirth responds afar — In moonlight serenade she scales the roof. Arouse his sunlight glimpse of fleeting gown. In tempest shines the greenest glow of eyes. His busy hands are empty tools that drown In longest days — he yearns to bid goodbye. They bond at dusk and dawn where breath holds hands. Godspeed In triplicate their spirit’s kiss. Their eyes so tired — a desert full of sand. The carbuncle-worn hearts adrift...amiss. So soon, but not quite soon enough, he’ll land To satisfy cooled sheets at love’s command. 10/4/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Carber Avatar
October 7, 2018 at 9:24 AM
Both sensual and poetic--'...where breath hold hands'-- nicely done, Kim-- congrats on your win
Rodrigues Avatar
October 7, 2018 at 6:04 PM
Thank you, L.J.!
Gauthier Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 10:39 AM
Congrats on your top win, Kim. Well penned.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 7, 2018 at 6:04 PM
Thank you, Line!
Pandit Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 9:10 AM
Excellent, Kim. The flow of your poem and the story..superbly done.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 9:12 AM
Thank you, dear Vijay!
Green Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 8:42 AM
Beautifully done Kim. I find sonnets very difficult to write, I can never get the flow consistent, but you have mastered the craft. Bravo.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 8:46 AM
Thank you, Chris! Hugs...Kim
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