Crumbling Castles

The castles built by human hands
crumble from the flood of years.
The moss that covers the ancient stones
are woven from nature's pool of tears.

A fabled dream of past nobility
haunts the aging body of rocks.
While the iron gates of stern dungeons
struggle to exist with rusted locks.

Spirits whisper within the frigid air,
leaving their stories upon the fairy tale grounds.
Winds caress the lofty towers,
singing over unmarked burial mounds.

These fading monuments of yesterday
reach out from mankind's dark past.
Museums of crumbling castles testify
that time's judgement arrives too fast.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Furr Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 3:30 PM
I think this could/would inspire me in my writing. Could I use it?
Sharp Avatar
December 30, 2015 at 6:57 PM
You welcome to it.
Brown Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 8:48 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Angie. Love, Carol
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June 27, 2010 at 12:22 PM
well thought out poem, on the old castles with much poetic zip!
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