Crumbling Cardboard

Piece by piece, bit by bit,
biting the steak, drinking the wine,
burying each cutout into its place.

My place in the banquet of life,
just like a puzzle, sometimes
sunshine yellow, sometimes fear,

midnight blue, a little unclear,
smiling when the quagmire
is revealed as a masterpiece.

Tight corners, dire straits,
when observed by passing time,
mere mosquito mementoes.

Souvenirs, those war wounds,
that touch the grandkid’s ears.
Many pieces will be picked up

through their years, as I disappear,
never completely, but eventually 
melding into their big picture,

and so it goes through the generations,
biting the steak, drinking the wine,
reflections of time; crumbling cardboard

refined, sublime, wizened, sharp,
suspended, haloed; will progeny
interlock generations with gratitude?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Hind Avatar
July 9, 2026 at 5:29 PM
"mere mosquito mementoes." I like that,
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 4:43 PM
beautiful metaphor and insightful words. sending hugs, Sara
Gibbons Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 2:42 PM
Simply Beautiful write Kim.. i was going to say I liked a certain stanza but I cant coz I love them all hugs friend <3
Rodrigues Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 2:48 PM
Oh…I thank you so much, Dorothy! Hugs!
Rodgers Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 10:11 AM
Dear Kim, it'slike sitting at a long table with you, watching life come together piece by piece, the bright cuts of joy, the darker corners, the odd shapes that only make sense when time steps back far enough. A beautiful reflection. Warmly, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 10:48 AM
Your comments always thoughtful, dear Daniel!
Rolland Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 7:29 AM
very touching lesson, we have to transmit dignity too, like not forget WWII, thanks for the well written poem, dear poet
Rodrigues Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 8:18 AM
Never forget! Yes, honor and dignity, hard work and responsibility…so many things. What will we see as we look on… Hugs
DiMino Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 4:34 AM
Let's hope we leave them a little better world. No puzzle in wishing that. Very interesting poem. You sum it all up nicely. It is in God's hands. Time will tell.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 8:19 AM
Thanks, Joe! Always appreciate your thoughtfulness!
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