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Cruisin'

All aboard the Fantasy M/S of Carnival for half a week’s vacation time of fun and falderal. Hear greetings from your captain, his director and the crew. Ready, set, get going. The Bahamas wait for you. Bon Voyage! There’s Reggae music playing on the Lido. Dinner is at 6 or 8. Hold off on that tuxedo! You could eat a pizza by the Windows On the Sea or go beneath to dine on shrimp and meet the maitre d’. Gamble or see comedy; reflect upon the ocean. Late to bed; relax your head; sense the soothing motion. Rise and shine in Freeport where the ship will dock all day. You can disembark to take a tour, or you can stay. On board the ship, take a dip; lounge or dance Calypso. Get yourself massaged; work out, shop or play some bingo. All day long, you can find folks doing funny things like contests for the men with hairy chests or knobby knees. Day two when you waken, you will be in Nassau. There’s stuff for everyone, from your kiddies to your grandma! Little ones may stay behind. Folks will entertain them, or the kids can tag along with the adults. No problem! If you like adventure, visit lovely Blue Lagoon. For snorkeling with sting rays, the boat leaves right at noon. You can pet some dolphins, but extra you should pay if you want to swim with them. That’s one special day. In town you might be nabbed by a plaza beautician. Getting braids is all the rage, so people get their hair done. Get back to the gangway before the ship sets sail. If you‘re still not having fun, you must be a door nail! “Day at Sea” arrives as your trip is winding down, And the biggest night is coming; women wear a gown! That final evening dining perhaps with a new friend, you’ll wish instead of ending, it were starting all again. Gals and guys with braided scalps; everyone looks nice. Ah, that midnight feast with pretty sculptures carved in ice. The ultimate for leisure if you’re after more than snoozing’. In the laid-back natives lingo: “Mon, you best be cruising!”
NOTE: (this describes a vacation I took about 12 years ago, my first and probably last cruise ever, unless I come into money. haha. I'd seen Europe in my youth but as vacations go,this truly was the best one.) For Carol Brown's Contest: "It's Time for a Vacation"

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Date: 5/11/2011 5:26:00 PM
On all my cruises, the ships were gray and all the passengers were male and dressed the same. Sounds like yours was much more fun. Vince
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Date: 5/10/2011 4:03:00 PM
Thanks for taking us along. enjoyed.
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Date: 5/6/2011 4:17:00 AM
Sounds like a BLAST, Andrea. Many congrats on your WIN. Lainie
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Date: 5/5/2011 10:26:00 PM
It must have been an awesome trip Andrea. Many congrats for this win.
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Date: 5/5/2011 7:59:00 PM
all aboard with this fun theme, heartie... enjoyed the trip with you and sweet congrats for the happy win! whoot!:) hugggs!
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Date: 5/5/2011 6:21:00 PM
Andrea, Great to see you poem's success in the winner's circle. Congratulations on your honored poem. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/5/2011 1:56:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. Excellent piece. We are going on a cruise in Dec. This will be the 9th year in a row we've gone cruising in Dec. I'd go on a cruise every month if I could afford it! As far as vacations go, you can't beat it. Anyway nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 5/5/2011 1:35:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your fantastic win in the vacation contest my friend with this fine adventure.. enjoy another sweet victory with luv...for excellence...
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Date: 5/5/2011 1:12:00 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/5/2011 12:21:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, Andrea
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Date: 5/5/2011 12:12:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your 10th place win in my "It's Time For A Vacation" contest. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/29/2011 2:25:00 PM
Just floating along in your Wake Andrea sounds like this will rank high in the contest!
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Date: 4/26/2011 3:45:00 PM
I, similarly, have done most of my traveling in my early adult years. A nice, itineric poem on cruise fare.
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Date: 4/25/2011 9:47:00 PM
It sounds like you had an awesome time Andrea, enjoyed your write this morning.. Love Wilma
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Date: 4/25/2011 1:04:00 PM
i love this beautiful poem you wrote. Thank you for commenting on Something Beautiful.
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Date: 4/25/2011 10:52:00 AM
I'm sure you enjoyed this vacation, Andrea. The charter boat trip is costing a bundle, too. A once-in-a-lifetime trip. Maybeyou can put on some reggae music, make a Bahama Mama and pretend you are still on that cruise while dancing in your living room. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/25/2011 10:01:00 AM
Sounds like a wonderful vacation. I wish we could go on a nice vacation. Al will not fly anymore so where ever we go we drive. He prefers to stay at home and sit on the deck and have a beer. This cruise sounds like you had a lot of fun and good memories. love phyl
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Date: 4/25/2011 8:24:00 AM
Now, THAT sounds like a fun vacation, Andrea!
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Date: 4/25/2011 5:03:00 AM
A fantastic journey ... a super vacation .. wish I were there... though I like my feet on the ground but u made this one fun and really cool...good luck in the contest my friend... luv guys and gals with braided scalps..we may try this for Summer..haha..well me..Ron is bald..haha..
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Date: 4/24/2011 1:22:00 PM
yeow, a fun-filled piece with lines of charming rays of joy, andie girl!... i just had one cruise experince in europe, that's it, hah!... splendid description; i feel i'm there wit you... winning material! :) huggs
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Date: 4/24/2011 12:54:00 PM
Sounds wonderful, Andrea : ) A muse cruise?
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Date: 4/24/2011 12:26:00 PM
It is good to learn that it is based on what reallly happened...Reads like an exciting time with fun to spare or share..Good luck in the contest with this winners' cirlce for sure..Thanks for stopping by my blog...We made it back without a mishap...The children had a great time with some memories to carry into the future..My husband and I made it alright but both we exhausted last night...Sara
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Date: 4/24/2011 8:34:00 AM
Sounds like you ahd a grand time, Andrea! Never been on a cruise before so reading this was so much fun - thanks for taking me there ;) haha now I want to go on a cruise!! gosh my connection's sooo s-l-o-w- I am ready to weep!! durrnnnnn--- well catch up sooon- I am just dropping by one poem per poet right now-- hahaha! gosh this internet connection's pathetic! & I have to finish books too!!! eeek-- wish me luck! Happy Easter sweetie :) hugs to you :)
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Date: 4/24/2011 7:47:00 AM
Truly, a "Love Boat" tour. I've never been on one, but from what you say, it must be fun. Sorry, I can't help but rhyme. Unfortunately, mine is not like Andrea Dietrich's wonderful rhymes. mine is corny. Love, daver
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Date: 4/24/2011 5:56:00 AM
Wonderful vacation you had ANDREA.You virtually took me there through this poem--kash
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