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Cruise the Nile Premiere Contest Winner

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oh come my love and take a trip with me upon a sailing ship we'll sail the mighty River Nile relax, take my hand awhile, magical times and spooky night tombs historical sites and temples where sands of desert extend in all of these incredible regions the reeds as they rush by azure waters reflect the sky Valley of the Kings, the land upon which we touch in awe ancient Egyptian feluccas are silent on the water stretch to try to find our one genuine drive the need to reach out and stifle the blaze. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~ ~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~ ~~~~~~ ~~~~~~ Written: May 26, 2023 1St Place Contest Winner A Brian Strand Premiere No 1220 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 6/9/2023 10:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win, Lasaad! Wonderful, unique shape poem that fills the sails with your creativity! The shape and the words fit together perfectly!!! Of all of the shape poems I've seen, I've never seen a sail boat! It is perfect! Thanks for this visual, poetic treat! Blessings my friend. Happy Sailing through the mysteries of time!
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Date: 6/4/2023 9:24:00 AM
I love the mention of the tombs, gets at the mystery and fear of love. Congratulations Sotto!
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Date: 6/4/2023 2:58:00 AM
Great design on this winner. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara
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Date: 6/3/2023 4:05:00 AM
Lasaad, congratulations on your first place trophy win with your wonderfully creative poem.
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Date: 6/3/2023 1:20:00 AM
An exceptional shape poem with imagery that sails like a lone ship under the moonlit sea. Congratulations on your well-deserved win!
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Date: 6/2/2023 10:21:00 AM
Big CONGRATS to win TOP for your extra ordinary poem. Blessings
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Date: 6/2/2023 9:21:00 AM
Sheer artistry! Warmest congratulations on your trophy win, SP
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Date: 6/2/2023 8:36:00 AM
Congrats to you. Well done.
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Date: 6/2/2023 4:21:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations ... top win again, Las :) - hugs
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Date: 6/2/2023 3:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win with this great shape poem. It has always been a dream of mine to do a trip on the Nile, but alas, it has it will not come to pass.
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Date: 6/2/2023 2:04:00 AM
Sotto, wow, your poem is amazing, no wonder it is a top winner, congratulations !
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Date: 6/2/2023 1:09:00 AM
Beautiful! I love this one :)
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Date: 5/27/2023 7:32:00 AM
- You are so creative with these shape poems, Las ... great poem too :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 5/27/2023 5:06:00 AM
Another creative write, my friend. A beautiful journey on river Nile. You don't need good luck--a winning poem.
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Date: 5/27/2023 2:11:00 AM
Beautiful cruiseship so artistically done. Great penning ! I have been lucky enough to have travelled along the Nile. All the Best in the contest!
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Date: 5/26/2023 6:27:00 PM
beautiful penning, made me dream of Egypt, it seems you have travelled there, thanks for sharing
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Date: 5/26/2023 10:40:00 AM
Artistic nice poem.
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