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Premiere Contest WinnerCruise the Nile

                                                                oh

                                                                come

                                                            my love

                                                          and take

                                                       a trip with

                                                     me upon a

                                                  sailing  ship

                                               we'll  sail  the

                                            mighty River Nile

                                         relax, take my hand

                                        awhile, magical times

                                      and spooky night tombs  

                                    historical sites and temples

                                  where sands of desert extend

                                in all of these incredible regions

                              the reeds as they

                             rush by azure

                             waters     

                             reflect       

                             the           

                             sky          

                    Valley of the Kings, the land upon which we touch in awe
  
                        ancient Egyptian feluccas are silent on the water
                    
                            stretch to try to find our one genuine drive

                              the need to reach out and stifle the blaze.      
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Written: May 26, 2023

1St Place Contest Winner
A Brian Strand Premiere No 1220 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

Sponsored by: Vanya Evangeline
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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mysore Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 6:58 AM
creative write. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
Kauffman Avatar
June 9, 2023 at 10:52 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win, Lasaad! Wonderful, unique shape poem that fills the sails with your creativity! The shape and the words fit together perfectly!!! Of all of the shape poems I've seen, I've never seen a sail boat! It is perfect! Thanks for this visual, poetic treat! Blessings my friend. Happy Sailing through the mysteries of time!
Kendrick Avatar
June 4, 2023 at 2:58 AM
Great design on this winner. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara
Kitchin Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 4:05 AM
Lasaad, congratulations on your first place trophy win with your wonderfully creative poem.
Brul Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 1:20 AM
An exceptional shape poem with imagery that sails like a lone ship under the moonlit sea. Congratulations on your well-deserved win!
Dutta Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 10:21 AM
Big CONGRATS to win TOP for your extra ordinary poem. Blessings
Seeker Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 9:21 AM
Sheer artistry! Warmest congratulations on your trophy win, SP
Dietrich Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 8:36 AM
Congrats to you. Well done.
Andresen Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 4:21 AM
- Back with a congratulations ... top win again, Las :) - hugs
Richards Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 3:48 AM
Congratulations on your top win with this great shape poem. It has always been a dream of mine to do a trip on the Nile, but alas, it has it will not come to pass.
La France Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 2:04 AM
Sotto, wow, your poem is amazing, no wonder it is a top winner, congratulations !
Andresen Avatar
May 27, 2023 at 7:32 AM
- You are so creative with these shape poems, Las ... great poem too :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Pandit Avatar
May 27, 2023 at 5:06 AM
Another creative write, my friend. A beautiful journey on river Nile. You don't need good luck--a winning poem.
George Avatar
May 27, 2023 at 2:11 AM
Beautiful cruiseship so artistically done. Great penning ! I have been lucky enough to have travelled along the Nile. All the Best in the contest!
Rolland Avatar
May 26, 2023 at 6:27 PM
beautiful penning, made me dream of Egypt, it seems you have travelled there, thanks for sharing
Narain Avatar
May 26, 2023 at 10:40 AM
Artistic nice poem.
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