Carrie Richards Poet Etheree

Cruelest Winds

Autumn leaves released against the cruelest winds
unmoored, without  a distant shore to land
have no instruction, nor direction, 
swept by the tides of winter seas
Surfing waves without an oar
curled tight against themselves
Fall winds spread them far,
until they sink
and crumble
into
dust

While
I must
not stumble 
and must not curl
tight against myself
but be kin to nature...
soar the waves of winter seas
adrift in a sea of knowledge
following directions of my heart
unmoored, but with a distant shore to land
against the future of autumn's cruelest wind



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9/12/14  For Shadow's Contest: Double Etheree

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Daver Austin September 17, 2014 at 2:20 PM Wow! This double must have taken some thought. A double read for sure. great stuff. Love, daver

Kabuteng P.Ink K. September 13, 2014 at 12:20 PM Ah, the winds sure can be the cruelest indeed! And amazing how you pulled this off in a double etheree, Carrie! Wow! For me, you tied it so well, these 2 etherees, even turning it around and showing strength in character amidst those cruel winds... funny, my captcha says "arb"-- makes me think of "arboreal", which I also somehow relate to wind--wind blown trees during a storm. OK that was some weird connecting done by me, don't mind me.

Andrea Dietrich September 12, 2014 at 10:21 PM wow, this has metaphor, imagery, deep meaning AND great adherence to form. I LOVE this. best I have seen! (wait till you see the lame one I cooked up)

Tim Smith September 12, 2014 at 6:55 PM This is beautiful Carrie...I love the transition between the two...hugs Tim

Charmaine Chircop September 12, 2014 at 6:00 PM I love the message to choose the right path in life,and the determination and coutage to overcome the cruelest winds.Clever indeed dear Carrie.So much wisdom in your words my dear.

Frederic Parker September 12, 2014 at 5:50 PM I see wisdom in your poem, and the knowledge to connect the thread that runs through all life..thank you it was a good read

Casarah Nance September 12, 2014 at 5:06 PM Oh I love the balance between the two etheree's best of luck girl, awesome writing