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Not all roads are created equal. Someone said that there's no progress to be made if you're on the wrong road.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

How cruel this road: pointing and promising, lying and leading nowhere. Bruised, bleeding feet slog in monotonous ruts and never suspicion the insanity. Throngs gorge at endless tables and starve, drink from every cup and cough dust. They pursue completeness but die unfinished, their last coin invested in imposters who leave souls to rustle like parched fields. Why, on this road, is there weariness after every pleasure? Why, in every oasis, does exhaustion bead on blistered brows? What is this strange homesickness under each roof and choking on darkness midday?

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Date: 5/4/2022 4:53:00 PM
Powerful piece, my friend, and so apt for today's world.
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Ted Owens
Date: 5/5/2022 4:05:00 PM
Thanks, Franci.
Date: 5/3/2022 7:43:00 AM
An exceptionally powerful write that promotes thought especially in questions like "Why, in every oasis, does exhaustion bead on blistered brows?" You draw the reader into self reflection. Additionally, the alliteration registers imaginatively. Congratulations! Brian
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Date: 5/5/2022 4:09:00 PM
Thanks, Brian. You have encouraged me greatly.
Date: 5/3/2022 7:32:00 AM
To and of Hell- there is no solace in the "company" of other tormented souls in Hell, part of its torture. I believe Satan takes two Souls at a time-you lose your Significance to God as soon as you descend into the unimaginablely, absolutely cannot withstand-you CANNOT go to Hell, for this reason alone-pain- of being with the Devil, and his demons. I do not believe existing in Hell is eternal, however, like your road. Thank you for this read.
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Date: 3/17/2022 4:05:00 AM
You hit the nail on the head. I love this poem!
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