Crude Sorrow

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Pieces of broken glass. Slow tears in a broken heart. Insipid vows. Doubtful romance! I am on the brink. I adore loving. But dread sorrow. I endure crude agony. Being far off your sway. However, I am terrified. that could serve me. Written: June 18, 2022

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Valsa George

Date: 6/19/2022 9:04:00 AM

There is a tinge of melancholy in these lines..... ! Life has to be accepted with its inevitable ups and downs !

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/19/2022 4:40:00 AM

Life should be accepted as it is,i.e. a union of opposites. Nothing can be understood without the existence of its opposite. A thoughtful poem, my friend, Lasaad! Beautifully written!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/19/2022 1:46:00 AM

Rather sad (especially if you were enjoying a cruise).

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/18/2022 12:53:00 PM

Poignant at its core--well expressed, emotive write.