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Crude Sorrow

Pieces of broken glass.
Slow tears in a broken heart.
Insipid vows.
Doubtful romance!

I am on the brink.
I adore loving.
But dread sorrow.

I endure crude agony.
Being far off your sway.
However, I am terrified.
that could serve me.

 Written: June 18, 2022

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Valsa George June 19, 2022 at 9:04 AM There is a tinge of melancholy in these lines..... ! Life has to be accepted with its inevitable ups and downs !

Demetrios Trifiatis June 19, 2022 at 4:40 AM Life should be accepted as it is,i.e. a union of opposites. Nothing can be understood without the existence of its opposite. A thoughtful poem, my friend, Lasaad! Beautifully written!

Victor Buhagiar June 19, 2022 at 1:46 AM Rather sad (especially if you were enjoying a cruise).

Vijay Pandit June 18, 2022 at 12:53 PM Poignant at its core--well expressed, emotive write.