Crucifixion

Our sins, sweet Jesus,

Forged nails to crucify you
 
Became


Yet 


Your divine blood, 

Away washed, all humanity’s

Shame!





© Demetrios Trifiatis
      11 MARCH 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Yvonne Avatar
April 1, 2015 at 7:02 AM
A beautiful expression of your faith. A sublime write.
Nunez Avatar
March 30, 2015 at 6:56 PM
Amen! No other words to add. Am just plain grateful...Happy to see your lovely smile again, sire. Hugs! :) Kim
Roper Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 8:44 AM
I ache every time I think of his sacrifice, the cleansing of our sins when there is so much unfairness or undeserved outcomes today. a 7 Dear friend
Trifiatis Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 12:34 PM
How wonderful would be for all of us to think more often of His sacrifice, dear Eve! The world would certainly be a better one! Thank you so much! God bless you!
Andresen Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 4:09 AM
- Our sin was placed on Jesus - He died with our sin - Powerful poem my dear friend Demetrios - <3 and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 12:31 PM
Anne-Lise, my very good friend, thank you for visiting and commenting!
Smith Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 4:08 PM
Truly remarkable tribute to our Lord
Trifiatis Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 7:13 PM
Truly I thank you my dear friend, Tim! Our Lord deserves much better tribute than this humble expression of mine!
Lamoureux Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 9:52 AM
I am unable to fully comprehend a Love this deep but I am so thankful for His sacrifice. Without Jesus I would most certainly be lost.
Trifiatis Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 1:09 PM
It is difficult for a mere mortal to understand divine love, my good friend, Richard. You are not the only one so do not feel bad! I agree with you that we should be grateful for His love! Thank you!
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March 11, 2015 at 8:13 AM
The first two lines, so profound and yet so sad. You have the gift of insight, Demetrios and you say much while at the same time, needing the use of very few words to convey your meaning.
Trifiatis Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 1:04 PM
Thank you, Diane, merci mon amie pour ta visite! With a French name like ths, I believe you speak French as well! It is so wonderful to see you again. Your comment very appreciated!
Mcdaid Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 7:25 AM
wow outstanding piece a blessed painting beautifully penned demetrios amen dear pal
Trifiatis Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 2:50 PM
I pray all to go well for you my friend! God bless you!
Mcdaid Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 2:40 PM
dear demetrios not on line as much as i feel drained with all that's going on in my life i pray you have a great week head always your friend liam
Trifiatis Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 1:02 PM
Liam, my pal, where have you been? I have missed your visits. Thank you for your kind visit and comment!
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