Crucifixion

Our sins, sweet Jesus,

Forged nails to crucify you
 
Became


Yet 


Your divine blood, 

Away washed, all humanity’s

Shame!





© Demetrios Trifiatis
      11 MARCH 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/1/2015 7:02:00 AM
A beautiful expression of your faith. A sublime write.
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Date: 3/30/2015 6:56:00 PM
Amen! No other words to add. Am just plain grateful...Happy to see your lovely smile again, sire. Hugs! :) Kim
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Date: 3/12/2015 8:44:00 AM
I ache every time I think of his sacrifice, the cleansing of our sins when there is so much unfairness or undeserved outcomes today. a 7 Dear friend
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Date: 3/12/2015 12:34:00 PM
How wonderful would be for all of us to think more often of His sacrifice, dear Eve! The world would certainly be a better one! Thank you so much! God bless you!
Date: 3/12/2015 4:09:00 AM
- Our sin was placed on Jesus - He died with our sin - Powerful poem my dear friend Demetrios - <3 and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/12/2015 12:31:00 PM
Anne-Lise, my very good friend, thank you for visiting and commenting!
Date: 3/11/2015 4:08:00 PM
Truly remarkable tribute to our Lord
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/11/2015 7:13:00 PM
Truly I thank you my dear friend, Tim! Our Lord deserves much better tribute than this humble expression of mine!
Date: 3/11/2015 9:52:00 AM
I am unable to fully comprehend a Love this deep but I am so thankful for His sacrifice. Without Jesus I would most certainly be lost.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/11/2015 1:09:00 PM
It is difficult for a mere mortal to understand divine love, my good friend, Richard. You are not the only one so do not feel bad! I agree with you that we should be grateful for His love! Thank you!
Date: 3/11/2015 8:13:00 AM
The first two lines, so profound and yet so sad. You have the gift of insight, Demetrios and you say much while at the same time, needing the use of very few words to convey your meaning.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/11/2015 1:04:00 PM
Thank you, Diane, merci mon amie pour ta visite! With a French name like ths, I believe you speak French as well! It is so wonderful to see you again. Your comment very appreciated!
Date: 3/11/2015 7:25:00 AM
wow outstanding piece a blessed painting beautifully penned demetrios amen dear pal
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/11/2015 2:50:00 PM
I pray all to go well for you my friend! God bless you!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/11/2015 2:40:00 PM
dear demetrios not on line as much as i feel drained with all that's going on in my life i pray you have a great week head always your friend liam
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Date: 3/11/2015 1:02:00 PM
Liam, my pal, where have you been? I have missed your visits. Thank you for your kind visit and comment!
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