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Under the shining light Knelt before the words of Pontius Pilate With Judas alongside Did sins of creed bestow upon me the cry of the century John, did thee see My crimes wash away In Jordan, or was it just me? Is Apostles' Creed devoid of truth For did He visit Hell? While He resurrected. Take me down that path So I build my own shrine While the Holy Lance digs deep And take away me, But no one to throw, no one to see While I hang on the dogwood. © Rohan Suresh

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Date: 10/5/2024 5:54:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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