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Just breathe in slowly, let the panic pass. Too many people, each with their words and thoughts. Too much movement, head starts to spin and chest gets tight. All you can think is 'run' but you're frozen to the spot. It's far too crowded here.

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Date: 11/29/2012 11:27:00 AM
A very belated congratulations in this Fear contest Karlin. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/19/2012 11:34:00 AM
Karlin, Congratulations with your thought provoking poem In Tanya's "What's Your Fear?" contest. Have yourself a nice sweet day.. always~ PD
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Date: 11/17/2012 1:30:00 PM
Do you have this phobia, Karlin? Well done for the contest and congrats. My hubbie used to have panic attacks and I know how difficult they are.
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Date: 11/16/2012 11:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your scary win xx
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Date: 11/16/2012 11:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this interesting little poem. Well done. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/16/2012 9:45:00 PM
congrats on your win cory
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