Crowded

Just breathe in slowly,
let the panic pass.
Too many people,
each with their 
words and thoughts.
Too much movement,
head starts to spin
and chest gets tight.
All you can think
is 'run' but you're
frozen to the spot.
It's far too 
crowded here.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 11:27 AM
A very belated congratulations in this Fear contest Karlin. Love, Carol
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November 19, 2012 at 11:34 AM
Karlin, Congratulations with your thought provoking poem In Tanya's "What's Your Fear?" contest. Have yourself a nice sweet day.. always~ PD
Dietrich Avatar
November 17, 2012 at 1:30 PM
Do you have this phobia, Karlin? Well done for the contest and congrats. My hubbie used to have panic attacks and I know how difficult they are.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 16, 2012 at 11:30 PM
Congratulations on your scary win xx
Johnson Avatar
November 16, 2012 at 11:12 PM
Congratulations on your win with this interesting little poem. Well done. Love, Joyce
Long Avatar
November 16, 2012 at 9:45 PM
congrats on your win cory
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