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crow moon

crusted snow gives way
	celebratory worm fest ~
		crow caws the ending

birdmoonnatureseasonsspringhaiku

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Thomas Wells

September 25, 2021 at 4:29 PM

This poem captures the essence of spring in three powerful simple lines! You are a master. Please keep writing. Best, Thomas

Linda Alice Fowler

October 21, 2021 at 8:08 AM

Thank you Tomas. I appreciate you stopping by to comment.

Brian Sambourne

June 8, 2021 at 8:39 PM

What a superb Haiku! The images of snow receding to crows feeding - poetry perfection. Best wishes, Brian

Linda Alice Fowler

October 21, 2021 at 8:08 AM

Thanks Brian!

Joanna Daniel

June 8, 2021 at 4:09 AM

Aha! Perfect one, Linda:)

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

May 18, 2021 at 8:17 AM

Wow a fest n feast hidden in snow. Great caprure poetic snapshot in haiku brevity . Kudos! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

Chuck Melugin

April 3, 2021 at 10:14 AM

Perfect picturesque!! Linda, you are leaping the hurdles great!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

April 2, 2021 at 9:38 AM

Great haiku, Linda. "crusted snow" - how lovely imagery. and of course the worms are out! BW ~ Mala

Elaine George

March 26, 2021 at 9:00 PM

A lovely Haiku, Linda.

Linda Alice Fowler

March 27, 2021 at 5:26 AM

Hi Elaine. :) Thanks for the visit and nice comment! Linda

Harry Horsman

March 26, 2021 at 7:53 PM

A Different poem for spring, and a joy to read.

David Kavanagh

March 26, 2021 at 8:49 AM

Heya Linda it most definitely must be spring when the worms start to surface, your haiku is a feast for the eyes, and the birds indeed will finish them off, cheers David

Linda Alice Fowler

March 26, 2021 at 1:42 PM

I'll try to save some for fishing ;) Thanks for the visit and comment! :) Linda

Judy Ball

March 26, 2021 at 8:43 AM

Great write. Nature at it's best. God Bless, JB

Linda Alice Fowler

March 26, 2021 at 1:42 PM

Many thanks Judy Ball! :) Linda

Tom Cunningham

March 24, 2021 at 4:00 PM

Spring is definitely here and most welcome too. Tom

Linda Alice Fowler

March 24, 2021 at 4:50 PM

Thanks Tom. I am ready for it too. My plums have bloomed and the apple trees and blueberries are budding. A little trouble with the fig tree however- such a devastating snow and ice for Texas a few weeks ago. :) Linda