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Crow Moon

crusted snow gives way celebratory worm fest ~ crow caws the ending

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 9/25/2021 4:29:00 PM
This poem captures the essence of spring in three powerful simple lines! You are a master. Please keep writing. Best, Thomas
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/21/2021 8:08:00 AM
Thank you Tomas. I appreciate you stopping by to comment.
Date: 6/8/2021 8:39:00 PM
What a superb Haiku! The images of snow receding to crows feeding - poetry perfection. Best wishes, Brian
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/21/2021 8:08:00 AM
Thanks Brian!
Date: 6/8/2021 4:09:00 AM
Aha! Perfect one, Linda:)
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Date: 5/18/2021 8:17:00 AM
Wow a fest n feast hidden in snow. Great caprure poetic snapshot in haiku brevity . Kudos! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
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Date: 4/3/2021 10:14:00 AM
Perfect picturesque!! Linda, you are leaping the hurdles great!
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Date: 4/2/2021 9:38:00 AM
Great haiku, Linda. "crusted snow" - how lovely imagery. and of course the worms are out! BW ~ Mala
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Date: 3/26/2021 9:00:00 PM
A lovely Haiku, Linda.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/27/2021 5:26:00 AM
Hi Elaine. :) Thanks for the visit and nice comment! Linda
Date: 3/26/2021 7:53:00 PM
A Different poem for spring, and a joy to read.
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Date: 3/26/2021 8:49:00 AM
Heya Linda it most definitely must be spring when the worms start to surface, your haiku is a feast for the eyes, and the birds indeed will finish them off, cheers David
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/26/2021 1:42:00 PM
I'll try to save some for fishing ;) Thanks for the visit and comment! :) Linda
Date: 3/26/2021 8:43:00 AM
Great write. Nature at it's best. God Bless, JB
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/26/2021 1:42:00 PM
Many thanks Judy Ball! :) Linda
Date: 3/24/2021 4:00:00 PM
Spring is definitely here and most welcome too. Tom
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/24/2021 4:50:00 PM
Thanks Tom. I am ready for it too. My plums have bloomed and the apple trees and blueberries are budding. A little trouble with the fig tree however- such a devastating snow and ice for Texas a few weeks ago. :) Linda
Date: 3/24/2021 3:54:00 PM
Really well done!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/24/2021 4:47:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. I was glad to hear the crow caw the end of Winter - enough! :) Linda
Date: 3/24/2021 2:02:00 PM
Beautiful haiku, Linda. It's warm here and the worms are out in full force. Great pivot in the last line! Hugs, Carolyn
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/24/2021 2:25:00 PM
Many thanks Carolyn. Your comments are warmly embraced :) Linda