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Image result for pictures of mockingbird dive bombing a crowThey are the fierces little birds. 

crow

A modern Haiku 3-5-3 words invented by Collum and is called a Lune..

iridescent crow walks fence between flower and vegetables.... mockingbird bravely chases
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
May 11, 2026 at 4:35 PM
nicely penned Haiku, Sara K. wishing you well, blessings, Sara B
Kendrick Avatar
May 12, 2026 at 5:03 AM
Sara B., your visits always are uplifting. Thank you for your time spent here. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 10:04 AM
I like how some birds have that iridescent color. I like seeing how you do this form called a Lune.
Kendrick Avatar
May 12, 2026 at 5:02 AM
Thank you, Andrea. I hope you will find time to try a few of this form and there is another one called a Lune that is 3-5-3 syllables. Thank you for your visit. Sara K
George Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 9:53 PM
Crows are clever birds. The mocking bird will not be able to do anything to a crow even if it chases it. An admirable new form of haiku....
Kendrick Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 4:08 AM
Valsa, yes, birds are intelligent and defenders themselves, but those mockingbirds will put them in their place. Sara K
Rolland Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 6:12 AM
delicious scenery, and creativity, thanks
Kendrick Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 8:15 AM
Yann, your visits are uplifting. Sara K
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