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Crouched Dreams

Imagination's leap, has come to a sudden halt. He crouches his dreams on an altar of skinned knees. Weary of his travels, calloused hands soothe a calloused foot. As he momentarily ponders, his heritage of great pain. __________________________________ Inspired by Michelangelo's Crouching Boy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/31/2009 8:10:00 AM
Kool piece Raul, do you know since i have joined the Soup - i have never looked at so many pictures of these old artists before >> James
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Date: 10/21/2009 4:04:00 PM
nice piece; love and peace: james
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Date: 10/21/2009 9:38:00 AM
Excellent job, Raul! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 10/21/2009 7:19:00 AM
I really like your vision and your use of "other" words.....:JP]
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Date: 10/21/2009 6:14:00 AM
Raul .. this is a poignant piece of poetry. very intense.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 10/21/2009 1:21:00 AM
Inspired so well..excellent work Raul..a Fav..i love your work.its unique--Charma
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Date: 10/21/2009 12:28:00 AM
Awesome! The death of nature? The death of poesy? Absolutely impossible!!! Keep writing. Canny.
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