Crouched Dreams

Imagination's leap,
has come to a sudden halt.
He crouches his dreams
on an altar of skinned knees.

Weary of his travels,
calloused hands soothe a calloused foot.
As he momentarily ponders,
his heritage of great pain. 



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Inspired by Michelangelo's Crouching Boy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 8:10 AM
Kool piece Raul, do you know since i have joined the Soup - i have never looked at so many pictures of these old artists before >> James
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October 21, 2009 at 4:04 PM
nice piece; love and peace: james
Haick Avatar
October 21, 2009 at 9:38 AM
Excellent job, Raul! Peace, Audrey
Pickett Avatar
October 21, 2009 at 7:19 AM
I really like your vision and your use of "other" words.....:JP]
Sweetheart Avatar
October 21, 2009 at 6:14 AM
Raul .. this is a poignant piece of poetry. very intense.. Linda-Marie
Chircop Avatar
October 21, 2009 at 1:21 AM
Inspired so well..excellent work Raul..a Fav..i love your work.its unique--Charma
Amah Avatar
October 21, 2009 at 12:28 AM
Awesome! The death of nature? The death of poesy? Absolutely impossible!!! Keep writing. Canny.
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