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Crosswise- My Faith

That day                 you have              died
Crucified                 for all                   for me
You cried                on the cross          completely
Finished                  a way                   made free

Finished                  a way                   made free
You rose                 to share                your spirit
To give                   by grace                to me
New Life                 your light               to see

Copyright © Brian Strand | Year Posted 2008

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Sharon Winter Date: 11/10/2008 6:26:00 AM So amazingly beautiful. Love, Shar Login to Reply

Michael Torres Date: 11/9/2008 10:26:00 PM Brian this is another exception as always. Nice illustration of words. I love your message here. This one brings blessings to you how did I miss it. Thanks for you sincere comments Michael Torres Login to Reply

Joseph Spence Sr Date: 11/9/2008 12:15:00 PM This is very ingenious. I like the topography and the flow of the words. This is very impacting. Just imagine what the world would be like if not for the resurrection and ascension? Great job! ~Joseph Login to Reply

Diane Christian Date: 11/9/2008 11:25:00 AM hiya thanks for your feed back on my poetry, yes I read this earlier and think it is great, it is so uplifitg and I pray others see the truth in your wonderful write, God bles from diane Login to Reply

Diane Christian Date: 11/9/2008 8:37:00 AM what a beautiful write, so full of truth, God bless you from diane Login to Reply

Kristin Reynolds Date: 11/9/2008 4:30:00 AM Amen, Brian. I was just speaking to my kids about this yesterday, how even though they crucified Christ, he still had nothing but love. A perfect poem, on a timeless subject - nothing but love. :) Thanks for lightening my heart this am, love Kristin Login to Reply