Crooked Cottage

Walking along the lanes on a hot summers day
I was entranced by a rather crooked cottage 
the mullion windows gave a view to the bay
clickity clack went the wheels of the carriage

Curious I wandered over, pausing to read the sign
It said it was for sale I wrote down the details
the agent arranged a viewing, impressed I under-sign
now mine I settle in enjoying the light from the fantails

Speckled and dappled seemingly infused with other worldliness
doors loose in their frames and window panes that rattled
walls that sagged and bugled  time marking them with cruelness
yet with a quaint charm of its own even though the floors buckled

With a happy sigh I watched the yachts skim and skip the waves
toddlers happily splashing in the shallows parents watching
carriages carrying the rich and fashionably dressed knaves
whilst high born men and ladies chatted under the awning
 
In that moment I knew that no matter what here I'd stay
quite won over by the way the crooked cottage caressed
feeling a warmth of welcome radiating and enfolding this stray
at last the wayfarer could hang her hat, over now her quest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kayode Avatar
January 23, 2014 at 6:57 PM
A wonderful one, beauty is in the eyes of beholder , though crooked cottage the location compensates. Impressive. Kayod5
Hamilton Avatar
January 24, 2014 at 5:56 AM
hi Kayod5 I love old buildings they are full of history ty very much Shadow x smile hug
Onclaud Avatar
January 23, 2014 at 10:52 AM
for some reason, this makes my heart flutter.. i think it;s how you paced your musings and clinched them in the end.. lovely melody of cottage ponderings.. huggs!
Hamilton Avatar
January 24, 2014 at 6:00 AM
hi Nette our old cottages are pictures of delight even when ram-shackled. so happy you enjoyed it Shadow x smile hug
Lamoureux Avatar
January 23, 2014 at 8:47 AM
I love it Shadow, you made it feel real and with an old English and old world feel to it.
Hamilton Avatar
January 24, 2014 at 6:01 AM
ty Rick appreciated Shadow x smile hug
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