'crooked Arrow'

reading again for utter amazement Wilma luv..

AHHHHHHH now I know why I missed you so much.... what a work of art this is... A beauty as the same as its author.... luv and hugs Michael

unjique thoughts about Cupid and his arrow, Wilma. I think that his arrow is probably straight when it gets shot but when it hits home it takes on some strange crooks and turns andyou get all of the above! realy nice job of it Wilma and yup doing just dandy here... How bout you ?

This is very sweet. I just read Kim's poem with 'crook' inside. You both are talented for sure :)

Now this is down right cute !! Shooting a crooked arrow is much like gambling....you never know where it will hit !!!

Hey there Missy! Love how you made even your title all crooked-- don't tell me Cupid got you?? Yup, where's the fun if it's a straight arrow? Enjoyed this reading this tanka of yours :D mwahugs!

Wery good Wilma, (crooked arrow) :) - oxox love Anne-Lise

gosh, how did you get your title to look that way?? I guess you just mixed the small and large letters. Very clever. A cool tanka to post with Valentine's DAy coming up!!

Yes, sometimes things that are not love are labeled love when the people have no idea what love is about..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..I hope that this has not happened to you..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Had fun writing the footle about the desire for chocolate..Sara

Loved this clever piece, Wilma. lfde

cleverly crafted piece Wilma.. so intimate.. luv the bold line in middle to emphasize it all.. good luck if for a contest luv.. hope all is well... cold in Italy today.. cloudy too..

Whether it's really floating hearts or jumbled thoughts, some people will always call it love. Frankly, I'd like to break Cupid's crooked arrow and get him one that shoots straight. Delightful poem as Valentine's day approaches, Wilma. Love, Carolyn

Love the way you have titled it:)

LOL....enjoyed the humour very much Wilma.Very good Tanka.