Tania Kitchin Poet Ottava rima

Crocs-Or

Crocs, they are my most comfortable shoes
They are a lifesaver for my sore feet
Socks and slippers on at home, I refuse
Grays or colors, fashion that can't be beat
Walk in them all day or rest for a snooze
Stay comfortable in the cold and heat
Heard a rumor they may stop making them
Absurd, sore feet would be a huge problem

6/16/19

Contest: Rima Ottava

Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Charles Messina July 1, 2019 at 3:33 PM Great entry for the contest, Tania. I must say I have never owned a pair of Croc's (lol) at first, I thought you were talking about crocodile skin shoes...lol Congratulations on your win in my contest...hugs Charlie :) Tania Kitchin July 1, 2019 at 4:33 PM Thank you and thank you for my winning placement! Crocs are not attractive shoes but so comfortable!

Andrea Dietrich June 22, 2019 at 7:36 PM oh let's hope they don't stop making them. I see you love shoes for comfort too. I love plain flats. If my back were better, I would wear more heels. they are so beautiful. (creative rima ottav, Tania. I hope it does well in the contest) and thanks again for liking my haiku so much. I have not had a trophy for a long time! Tania Kitchin June 23, 2019 at 5:29 AM Thank you Andrea and your are welcome in regards to your trophy win!

Tom Cunningham June 16, 2019 at 6:17 AM I fully agree Tania, I've got four pairs, one for the garden, one for inside, one for the beach and one as a spare. You're right , great for your feet. Invented by an Irishman Croc O'Doyle. Lol. Good luck. Tom