Croaking,My Song

Deep in to the woods by spring
my quest by daybreak for croaking, 
frog croaking, nature enthusiast‘s song,
hit upon by the *** end, a puddle,
frogs, a few in high spirits hopping,
something took the winds out of my sails!
whopping snake, old inactive by water,
these frogs take the snake a worm,
took me back to an old proverb:
when the snakes get old, 
the frogs get him by the balls!
laughing I too tried some croaking! 
great nap my song all around!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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March 16, 2014 at 12:10 PM
Hi, Where are you my friend,, miss you... Jenish.... :) It was nice to see your poem featured in the poetry soups, home page this past week. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever *LINDA
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March 15, 2014 at 10:05 PM
Not much seen on the PS, Busy? Jenish.Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Read and enjoyed it,
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March 11, 2014 at 1:12 PM
The old snake I am has lost his balls and is doing a lot of croaking. Like this one. Congrats on the selection. daver
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March 11, 2014 at 10:09 AM
Poet Undertaker, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. I'm always enjoying The Soups top picks of the week. Take Care ~SKAT~
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