Critique Footle

Critique



                  Word wars,

                   Soul scars!







August 15th, 2014
Written for contest 'Footle' by Judy konos
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nance Avatar
August 18, 2014 at 5:19 PM
That is true, that is why there is duct tape. good Footle :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 11:33 PM
yes that is so true!
Allison Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 8:15 AM
love this one! Hugs jan xxxx
Kendrick Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 6:22 AM
Deep one with much truth..Way to go for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Smith Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 6:09 AM
Well done Upma....hugs Tim
Manassian Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 5:56 AM
Brilliant. I really love this one! Hugs
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