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Critical Thinking

I've enrolled on a positive thinking course… I’m not sure it will work! Paradox of Life Poetry Contest Sponsored by JCB Brul 04/27/21
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Gauthier Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 10:32 PM
Bravo ~ back with congrats on your very witty monoku ~
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 4:11 PM
that was VERY smart thinking. A very well deserved win, dear Jan.
Ligon Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 9:07 AM
Amusing contrast. Doubt and negativity can definitely hinder positive thinking. Congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 8:31 AM
Congratulations on your win. A great write and picture. So True. Have a blessed day writing away....................
Y. Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 7:02 AM
Hi Jan, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on a well deserved win. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis
Koplin Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 4:54 PM
That's awesome!! lol
Kavanagh  Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 3:06 PM
Well it has worked Jan with this fine paradoxical monoku a nice treat for us all, best of luck in the contest, cheers David
Ball Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 11:07 AM
Love this Jan. It made me laugh. Thanks bunches. God Bless, JB
Pettit Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 5:00 PM
Does it come with a money back guarantee? Good write.
Flaherty Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 4:26 PM
Student becomes the Master
Leffanta Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 12:18 PM
Smirk! Smirk!
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 11:03 PM
Haha. A good one Jan. : )
Gauthier Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 7:48 PM
LOL ~ you're wasting your money
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 6:07 PM
Greetings dear Jan, I wanted to enroll in a Critical Thinking class, but it was filled to capacity. I hurried to your side and what did I get? Just "Think +" I'm done!
Lawless Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 5:01 PM
NOW THAT'S FUNNY!!!!!
Allison Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 5:06 PM
Thanks John:-) hugs Jan xx
Flood Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 4:44 PM
Nice one, Jan. Sure bet for a high score. Terry
Allison Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 5:05 PM
thanks Terry:-) hugs Jan xx
Bauer Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 4:20 PM
ha! i can't think of anything that could top this one, jan! HILARIOUS!!!
Allison Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 4:30 PM
Glad I made you smile, I hope the sponsor likes it:-) hugs Jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 2:46 PM
Lol, good one Jan, hope you get a refund. Tom
Allison Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 2:46 PM
lol Tom:-) hugs Jan xx
Y. Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 2:37 PM
WoW! Jan, Good one-liner; it looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
Allison Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 2:46 PM
Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
Buhagiar Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 2:12 PM
Oh I loved this monoku. Made me laugh a bit. Hugs.
Allison Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 2:13 PM
Glad you saw the irony in it Victor!:-) that was my intention:-) hugs Jan xx
Romios Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 1:44 PM
Jan! Brilliant...love it.. Hugs Pangie. Best to you.
Allison Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 1:54 PM
Thanks Pangie after 20 reads i finally got a comment thanks for yours:-) hugs Jan xx
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