Critic

hear thou art not false
or sense should never been told 
for thy world has much to impress
if by heart wish not belief but reason 
wish not justice but fame
yee have many more 
sought to live for 
yet all but one remain out of critic 
The expert thyself
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kalishian Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 4:29 PM
Shakespeare how honored , well its still a bit difficult for me to apply all poetic rules but i will enhance my skills a bit to avoid any muddling ;)) although i think its good for readers to be confused in some text they get to focus more and reach to the poets state . thank you i appreciate it, ill do my best .
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September 19, 2016 at 4:03 PM
Welcome to Soup, Talin. I see you use archaic language (thou, thee, thy) I like your themes, but the use of second person singular pronouns muddled things for me, a bit, I'm sorry to say. Are these for a project, perhaps, on Shakespeare? If so, you have caught an era very well. The website has many resources for poets. I hope you take some time and poke around, explore links and read what others have posted to Soup. Cheers!
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