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Crisp Croons

red feathers shimmer
on frosty coated pine boughs ~
crisp cardinal croons
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Messina Avatar
December 25, 2022 at 2:39 AM
Beautiful haiku, Tania. I love cardinals :) Merry Christmas to you and your family! Charlie
Kitchin Avatar
December 25, 2022 at 5:15 AM
Charlie, thank you!
Goldsmith Avatar
December 24, 2022 at 11:14 AM
I love the red birds. A lovely write/picture. Have a great day..................
Kitchin Avatar
December 24, 2022 at 3:30 PM
Paula, thank you!
Kendrick Avatar
December 22, 2022 at 4:46 AM
Beautiful snapshot. Great work to go alongside. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Kitchin Avatar
December 22, 2022 at 1:37 PM
Sara, thank you!
George Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 3:22 AM
Beautiful haiku and beautiful image !
Kitchin Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 3:49 AM
Valsa, thank you!
DiMino Avatar
December 10, 2022 at 3:41 AM
The are amazing to see and listen to~ far greater creatures than their size would indicate. Well said!
Kitchin Avatar
December 10, 2022 at 4:09 AM
Joe, thank you!
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December 9, 2022 at 2:10 AM
Brilliant haiku. Alas I prefer not to have any birds except sparrows. We are not allowed to shoot hunters.
Kitchin Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 3:54 AM
Victor, thank you!
Cunningham Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 6:21 AM
Lovely image Tania, the red looks stunning against a white snowy background. Sadly we don't have them here. Tom
Kitchin Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 1:27 PM
Tom, thank you!
Andresen Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 6:09 AM
- Lovely haiku, Tania ... a beautiful color on the bird :) -
Kitchin Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 1:27 PM
Anne-Lise, thank you, Cardinals are one of my favorites and visit my feeders often!
Logan Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 5:57 AM
Cardinals are SO beautiful, and your Haiku is rich in imagery.
Kitchin Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 1:27 PM
Jenna, thank you!
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