Crisp Blue

Today, I seek a clear- cut sky- Emptied empyreal blue bowl that stretches thoughts thrown high. Transcends that endless flow of clouds carrying, to and fro, Spring season's rain, hail, snow. Posted 2017.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/26/2024 10:35:00 AM

Love your alliteration…just enough to tickle the ears. Lovely!

Aqua Marine
Date: 2/26/2024 10:41:00 AM

Thank you Kim, that's a lovely comment! Much appreciated! ((Big Hugs)) Aqua M.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/30/2019 4:13:00 PM

Short but delightful, Aqua... a celestial offering! Warm regards // paul

Aqua Marine
Date: 12/1/2019 1:00:00 AM

Hi Paul, its a verse out of a longer poem called "Soul Search" ( as in Self Search) which I posted here when I first came to PS a couple of years ago. I've been thinking of reposting it full length...While it is beneficial to "turn inwards" in deep reflection about life etc, I find affirmation in creation that surrounds us - too often ignored as humans rush around in daily life...( and there are so many stresses we gave to deal with..) We can still find beauty everywhere to uplift us in difficult times! Warm regards, Aqua M.