Crisp Blue

Today, I seek a clear- cut sky- 
Emptied empyreal blue bowl
that stretches thoughts thrown high.
Transcends that endless flow
of clouds carrying, to and fro,
Spring season's rain, hail, snow.

Posted 2017.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Rodrigues Avatar
February 26, 2024 at 10:35 AM
Love your alliteration…just enough to tickle the ears. Lovely!
Marine Avatar
February 26, 2024 at 10:41 AM
Thank you Kim, that's a lovely comment! Much appreciated! ((Big Hugs)) Aqua M.
Callus Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 4:13 PM
Short but delightful, Aqua... a celestial offering! Warm regards // paul
Marine Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 1:00 AM
Hi Paul, its a verse out of a longer poem called "Soul Search" ( as in Self Search) which I posted here when I first came to PS a couple of years ago. I've been thinking of reposting it full length...While it is beneficial to "turn inwards" in deep reflection about life etc, I find affirmation in creation that surrounds us - too often ignored as humans rush around in daily life...( and there are so many stresses we gave to deal with..) We can still find beauty everywhere to uplift us in difficult times! Warm regards, Aqua M.
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