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Edna Susana Del Río                                                                                                                                                                                 Más

- Crisp Air -

Fall
Enjoy
the colors
A sure winner
smell of fresh crisp air
At its most beautiful
Darkness and cold are coming
Distant memory of summer
When the wind howls and disturb your dream






30/08/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Marcum Wong Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 9:14 PM
Fall is too brief, I agree. Your lovely poem and picture took me there. I loved the fresh flowing river framed by the autumn trees in this gorgeous picture you posted in your poem. Thank you. xxoo
Andresen Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 6:14 AM
- Many thanks for your lovely comments, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
September 4, 2019 at 5:51 AM
Your lovely poem echoes the thoughts of many, Anne-Lise. Personally I can cope with all seasons, though winter is a bit too hard on me!! Incidentally the other week I watched the cycling tour of Norway, and I admired the lovely weather and scenery! Hugs // paul
Andresen Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 6:14 AM
- Many thanks for your lovely comments, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kiser Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 10:14 PM
I don't mind the Fall but, dread the winter; it always seems so long. Beautifully penned.
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 1:25 PM
- Many thanks for your lovely comments, M.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Poteet Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 12:51 PM
Lovely nonet. Super thoughts to dream of after walking a Walk-a-thon yesterday in 95+ temperatures. Thanks for sharing, Sunshine. Beautiful pic too.
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 1:24 PM
- Autumn is here, R.A.P. ... summer is over :( - Many thanks for your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 7:41 AM
aside from the fact i was born under autumn's colors, i am not a fan, it means cold will soon follow, love this one my friend and the fact that it makes sense reading if from top to bottom or bottom to top, great penning :) hugs
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 1:22 PM
- Yes, it can be read both ways ... glad you liked it ... - Many thanks for your lovely comments, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 6:45 AM
Beautiful imagery..
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 1:20 PM
- Many thanks for your lovely comments, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rose  Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 8:20 PM
What a wonderful time of year , enjoy the changes dear friend xo
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 1:19 PM
- Many thanks for your lovely comments, Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marty Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 5:55 PM
Amazing poem describing autumn's scenery!
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 1:19 PM
- Many thanks for your lovely comments, Lyva :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ilahi Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 3:25 PM
Autumn is my favourite season. Great poem very descriptive.
Andresen Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 3:31 PM
- Autumn makes me sad, Yasmin ... the beautiful nature dies ... and soon the cold winter - Many thanks for your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 2:29 PM
Had our first frost warnings last night and did not go cover my garden. Glad it did not freeze. Some places have had snow in August in northern Alberta. To early for me. lovely poem . love phyl
Andresen Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 2:58 PM
- We have had a few days with very lovely weather this week ... but, then came the rain and thunder - Autumn is just around the corner - Many thanks for visits and comments, dear friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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