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Crisis In Identity

Misguide in knowledge Misled in society Grain pretend as wheat Poor generation Camouflaged by the motion Lost in true nation Your skin ain't no lie Intelligence miss your mind Turn back, take a side Ain't no harm you plead To the country where you breathe Dedicate indeed *************************************************************** Honorable Mention Your best haiku Contest Judged: 11/18/2012 Sponsored by: Nathan a ***************************************************************

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/30/2012 6:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Nathan's "Your Best Haiku" contest Yanny. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/21/2012 11:07:00 AM

Congrats on your great win..Sara

Gail Debole

Date: 11/20/2012 3:55:00 PM

Hi Yanny - Many congratulations to you! - Gail

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/20/2012 9:17:00 PM

Thank you Gail, a warm welcome by you too :D -Hug, Yanny

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2012 9:54:00 PM

Hi, Yanny, it's nice to see your haiku on this winners' list. congrats to you.

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/19/2012 10:04:00 PM

Thank you Andrea, really nice to have you here too :D, Hug, Yanny

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/19/2012 2:43:00 PM

Yanny:-) congratulations with your good enough haiku... xox~PD

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/19/2012 5:07:00 PM

Thank's PD, your haiku is awesome too, and congrats to your first winner :D

Len Gasun

Date: 11/19/2012 10:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Yanny! love/hugs, Leonora

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/19/2012 5:05:00 PM

Thank you Leonara, it's a pleasure to have a visit by you :D - Hug,

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/19/2012 2:09:00 AM

CONGRATS YANNY ON WINNING AN HM FOR THIS OUTSTANDING HAIKU LUV ..

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/19/2012 7:39:00 AM

Thank you Linda, you brighten up my day too :D, Hug, Yanny

Nathan D.

Date: 11/18/2012 9:38:00 PM

good haiku' Nate

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/18/2012 10:47:00 PM

Thank you Nate :), you make my day too :), wishing u a great day :D- Hug, Yanny

John Posey

Date: 11/6/2012 3:35:00 AM

Beautifully crafted Haiku masterpiece. I've tried many times to create Haiku but the words stay hidden and my pen freezes. I salute you and feel there is great talent behind this post..... Jake

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/6/2012 7:38:00 AM

Thank you Jake, pleasure to have a visit by you :) - Regard, Yanny