Yanny Widjanarko Poet Haiku

Crisis In Identity

Misguide in knowledge
Misled in society
Grain pretend as wheat

Poor generation
Camouflaged by the motion
Lost in true nation

Your skin ain't no lie
Intelligence miss your mind
Turn back, take a side 

Ain't no harm you plead
To the country where you breathe
Dedicate indeed


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                                                     Honorable Mention
                                                       Your best haiku
                                             Contest Judged:  11/18/2012  
                                                 Sponsored by: Nathan a
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Carol Sunshine Brown November 30, 2012 at 6:38 AM Congratulations on your win in Nathan's "Your Best Haiku" contest Yanny. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick November 21, 2012 at 11:07 AM Congrats on your great win..Sara

Gail Debole November 20, 2012 at 3:55 PM Hi Yanny - Many congratulations to you! - Gail Yanny Widjanarko November 20, 2012 at 9:17 PM Thank you Gail, a warm welcome by you too :D -Hug, Yanny

Andrea Dietrich November 19, 2012 at 9:54 PM Hi, Yanny, it's nice to see your haiku on this winners' list. congrats to you. Yanny Widjanarko November 19, 2012 at 10:04 PM Thank you Andrea, really nice to have you here too :D, Hug, Yanny

Poet Destroyer A November 19, 2012 at 2:43 PM Yanny:-) congratulations with your good enough haiku... xox~PD Yanny Widjanarko November 19, 2012 at 5:07 PM Thank's PD, your haiku is awesome too, and congrats to your first winner :D

Len Gasun November 19, 2012 at 10:11 AM Congratulations on your win, Yanny! love/hugs, Leonora Yanny Widjanarko November 19, 2012 at 5:05 PM Thank you Leonara, it's a pleasure to have a visit by you :D - Hug,

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 19, 2012 at 2:09 AM CONGRATS YANNY ON WINNING AN HM FOR THIS OUTSTANDING HAIKU LUV .. Yanny Widjanarko November 19, 2012 at 7:39 AM Thank you Linda, you brighten up my day too :D, Hug, Yanny

Nathan D. November 18, 2012 at 9:38 PM good haiku' Nate Yanny Widjanarko November 18, 2012 at 10:47 PM Thank you Nate :), you make my day too :), wishing u a great day :D- Hug, Yanny

John Posey November 6, 2012 at 3:35 AM Beautifully crafted Haiku masterpiece. I've tried many times to create Haiku but the words stay hidden and my pen freezes. I salute you and feel there is great talent behind this post..... Jake Yanny Widjanarko November 6, 2012 at 7:38 AM Thank you Jake, pleasure to have a visit by you :) - Regard, Yanny