Crisis In Identity

Misguide in knowledge
Misled in society
Grain pretend as wheat

Poor generation
Camouflaged by the motion
Lost in true nation

Your skin ain't no lie
Intelligence miss your mind
Turn back, take a side 

Ain't no harm you plead
To the country where you breathe
Dedicate indeed


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                                                     Honorable Mention
                                                       Your best haiku
                                             Contest Judged:  11/18/2012  
                                                 Sponsored by: Nathan a
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 11/30/2012 6:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nathan's "Your Best Haiku" contest Yanny. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/21/2012 11:07:00 AM
Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Date: 11/20/2012 3:55:00 PM
Hi Yanny - Many congratulations to you! - Gail
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/20/2012 9:17:00 PM
Thank you Gail, a warm welcome by you too :D -Hug, Yanny
Date: 11/19/2012 9:54:00 PM
Hi, Yanny, it's nice to see your haiku on this winners' list. congrats to you.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/19/2012 10:04:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, really nice to have you here too :D, Hug, Yanny
Date: 11/19/2012 2:43:00 PM
Yanny:-) congratulations with your good enough haiku... xox~PD
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/19/2012 5:07:00 PM
Thank's PD, your haiku is awesome too, and congrats to your first winner :D
Date: 11/19/2012 10:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Yanny! love/hugs, Leonora
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/19/2012 5:05:00 PM
Thank you Leonara, it's a pleasure to have a visit by you :D - Hug,
Date: 11/19/2012 2:09:00 AM
CONGRATS YANNY ON WINNING AN HM FOR THIS OUTSTANDING HAIKU LUV ..
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/19/2012 7:39:00 AM
Thank you Linda, you brighten up my day too :D, Hug, Yanny
Date: 11/18/2012 9:38:00 PM
good haiku' Nate
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/18/2012 10:47:00 PM
Thank you Nate :), you make my day too :), wishing u a great day :D- Hug, Yanny
Date: 11/6/2012 3:35:00 AM
Beautifully crafted Haiku masterpiece. I've tried many times to create Haiku but the words stay hidden and my pen freezes. I salute you and feel there is great talent behind this post..... Jake
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/6/2012 7:38:00 AM
Thank you Jake, pleasure to have a visit by you :) - Regard, Yanny
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