Crimson Sunset

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August-19- 2025

Sunrise or Sunset Haiku Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Tania Kitchin.


in gossamer veil,
sun seen as a blushing bride~
her cheeks turned crimson

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2025 12:14:00 PM

Very cool, Valsa!!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/20/2025 12:04:00 PM

Your "Crimson Sunset" is a pretty write and picture. Love Both... "Good Luck" I did Pink... Have a fun day writing away............

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/20/2025 7:33:00 AM

I enjoy this study of the sun as a bride. May her groom arrive and both live happily ever after. (Will he be the moon or a planet?) I enjoy your fantastic imagination.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/19/2025 5:29:00 PM

outstanding Haiku! 'as a blushing bride' was perfect! best wishes with the contest, Sara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/19/2025 1:27:00 PM

Ahh!! Very descriptive work in this one. I like the comparison to being the bride. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Robert Sidwell

Date: 8/19/2025 11:35:00 AM

An absolutely beautiful haiku!

Jay Narain

Date: 8/19/2025 9:53:00 AM

Nice haiku. Very picturesque.

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/19/2025 9:14:00 AM

In your haiku, dear Valsa, beauty blooms like a quiet dawn. You've captured the essence of those sunsets, painted in hues of crimson, like whispers of twilight. I hope this week is full of success.