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August-19- 2025

Sunrise or Sunset Haiku Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Tania Kitchin.

Crimson Sunset


in gossamer veil,
sun seen as a blushing bride~
her cheeks turned crimson

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Joe Maverick

August 24, 2025 at 5:28 AM

I'm Having trouble commenting Sara i tried 7 times on your memories write.' Sorry.)

Victor Buhagiar

August 24, 2025 at 3:28 AM

Oh what a beautiful haiku. What great imagery, Deserves the best.

Joe Maverick

August 24, 2025 at 1:57 AM

A cheeky one, about the sun.' Beaut the Scene that you have spun'

John Fleming

August 22, 2025 at 3:48 PM

Lovely Haiku! High points indeed from me if I was judging. Very elegant and charming Haiku, Valsa. :) john

Andrea Dietrich

August 20, 2025 at 12:14 PM

Very cool, Valsa!!

Paula Goldsmith

August 20, 2025 at 12:04 PM

Your "Crimson Sunset" is a pretty write and picture. Love Both... "Good Luck" I did Pink... Have a fun day writing away............

Hilda Greenhough

August 20, 2025 at 7:33 AM

I enjoy this study of the sun as a bride. May her groom arrive and both live happily ever after. (Will he be the moon or a planet?) I enjoy your fantastic imagination.

sara Etgen-Baker

August 19, 2025 at 5:29 PM

outstanding Haiku! 'as a blushing bride' was perfect! best wishes with the contest, Sara

Sara Kendrick

August 19, 2025 at 1:27 PM

Ahh!! Very descriptive work in this one. I like the comparison to being the bride. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Robert Sidwell

August 19, 2025 at 11:35 AM

An absolutely beautiful haiku!

Jay Narain

August 19, 2025 at 9:53 AM

Nice haiku. Very picturesque.

Sotto Poet

August 19, 2025 at 9:14 AM

In your haiku, dear Valsa, beauty blooms like a quiet dawn. You've captured the essence of those sunsets, painted in hues of crimson, like whispers of twilight. I hope this week is full of success.

Crimson Sunset

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