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Crimson Leaves

Walking across a footbridge, strewn with crimson leaves, I watch as they twirl and pirouette in Autumn's chill wind leading them in a rhythmic dance that it skillfully weaves as they plummet, leaving branches naked and chagrinned. September 27, 2020 ~ Rithimus Divisa 7 Sponsored by Gregory Barden A verse from 'I Hear Autumn's Call'

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Date: 10/4/2020 4:39:00 PM
Congrats Jenna....nicely penned.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/12/2020 4:11:00 AM
Thank you, Jeanne.
Date: 10/2/2020 9:27:00 AM
Very creative, Jenna. Congratulations!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/12/2020 4:11:00 AM
Thanks, Sam.
Date: 10/2/2020 6:24:00 AM
I love the feeling this one imparts my friend. I dance with them! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/12/2020 4:10:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Lilnda.
Date: 10/1/2020 9:55:00 PM
This was beautifully penned, Jenna, and loaded with lots of imagery and creative excellence - loved everything about it! You are in wonderful company, and I congratulate you on another high placement - well-deserved, My Friend! - the bard
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/12/2020 4:10:00 AM
Thank you for honoring my lines.
Date: 9/29/2020 2:45:00 PM
Simply beautiful. A lovely verse that is a sure winner. God bless you
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/30/2020 3:49:00 AM
Thanks so very much, Regina.
Date: 9/28/2020 10:29:00 AM
Beautiful imagery Jenna. A sure win! Linda
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/30/2020 3:48:00 AM
I appreciate your kind remarks, Linda.
Date: 9/27/2020 2:03:00 PM
Creative verse, Jenna! I like how the journey of the leaves weaves through the fall season. Good luck in the contest! :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/30/2020 3:48:00 AM
Thank you for your thoughtful comments, Laura.

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