Jenna Logan Poet Rhyme

Crimson Leaves

Walking across a footbridge, strewn with crimson leaves,
    I watch as they twirl and pirouette in Autumn's chill wind
leading them in a rhythmic dance that it skillfully weaves
   as they plummet, leaving branches naked and chagrinned.




           September 27, 2020  ~  Rithimus Divisa 7
                  Sponsored by Gregory Barden
               A verse from 'I Hear Autumn's Call'

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Jeanne Mcgee October 4, 2020 at 4:39 PM Congrats Jenna....nicely penned. Jenna Logan October 12, 2020 at 4:11 AM Thank you, Jeanne.

Sam Kauffman October 2, 2020 at 9:27 AM Very creative, Jenna. Congratulations! Jenna Logan October 12, 2020 at 4:11 AM Thanks, Sam.

Linda Alice Fowler October 2, 2020 at 6:24 AM I love the feeling this one imparts my friend. I dance with them! Congratulations on the win! Linda Jenna Logan October 12, 2020 at 4:10 AM Thanks a lot, Lilnda.

Gregory Richard Barden October 1, 2020 at 9:55 PM This was beautifully penned, Jenna, and loaded with lots of imagery and creative excellence - loved everything about it! You are in wonderful company, and I congratulate you on another high placement - well-deserved, My Friend! - the bard Jenna Logan October 12, 2020 at 4:10 AM Thank you for honoring my lines.

Regina Mcintosh September 29, 2020 at 2:45 PM Simply beautiful. A lovely verse that is a sure winner. God bless you Jenna Logan September 30, 2020 at 3:49 AM Thanks so very much, Regina.

Linda Alice Fowler September 28, 2020 at 10:29 AM Beautiful imagery Jenna. A sure win! Linda Jenna Logan September 30, 2020 at 3:48 AM I appreciate your kind remarks, Linda.

Laura Leiser September 27, 2020 at 2:03 PM Creative verse, Jenna! I like how the journey of the leaves weaves through the fall season. Good luck in the contest! :) Jenna Logan September 30, 2020 at 3:48 AM Thank you for your thoughtful comments, Laura.