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Crimson Fall

Drips down my head
Looking at the sky
Bright and red

Slow and just still
Here waiting
And so I will

Falling on the asphalt
Drip, drip, drip
Slowly tearing my heart

Mother nature
I'm torn and crying
Don't leave me asunder


5/24/2013	
Rain, rain, rain Contest Entry.


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Nato Calubiran

May 30, 2013 at 7:56 PM

lost in rain3x contest. sucks bigtime

Debbie Duncan

May 30, 2013 at 12:29 AM

very nicely done ;} Under the dome starts Mon. June 24 CBS. My daughter gave me the book,,,,watch preview on Utube ;}

Nato Calubiran

May 30, 2013 at 1:01 AM

ok thanks. gonna check it out later.

Sara Kendrick

May 28, 2013 at 4:49 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative work..I had not heard the song "Laura" so I looked it up..My poem was about my biological mother who died and left me 15 months old, a son 6 years old, a son 9 or 11 years old, a son around 16 and another son 19 to 21 years old..By todays longevity she died way too young...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Nato Calubiran

May 28, 2013 at 6:55 PM

did you like the song, Think of Laura? its one of my oldies song favorites, also other songes by Bread