Daniel Schack Poet Burlesque

Criminally Sane

I guess I once was a juvenile delinquent. Then I became an adult delinquent. Now I'm a middle age delinquent. Soon enough I'll be a senior citizen delinquent. When all is said and done and it is all over I'll just become a dead delinquent. Ha Ha.

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Jhinuk Mukherjee June 4, 2020 at 12:49 PM WOW, intriguing thought and provoking at the same time. You have a spark indeed.

Georgia Kereopa May 20, 2020 at 6:35 PM Dan, Your voice is loud, message blunt and no doubt polarising. Fresh energy and humour. I’m looking forward to being a Senior Citizen delinquent! thanks for the fun read.

Old Buck May 28, 2019 at 9:36 AM Dan: The name for Sr. Citizen delinquent is "dementia". It's sort of fun. Everything is new and different every day. You can get in trouble and not feel like you are repeating yourself. Take it from the "Champ". oldbuck

Matthew Anish May 13, 2019 at 9:58 PM Do you know the song that goes no,no I'm not a juvenile delinquent. This piece reminds me to that. I hope you have a lot of years before you become a dead delinquent. Yours Matthew A