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Criminally Sane

I guess I once was a juvenile delinquent. Then I became an adult delinquent. Now I'm a middle age delinquent. Soon enough I'll be a senior citizen delinquent. When all is said and done and it is all over I'll just become a dead delinquent. Ha Ha.

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Jhinuk Mukherjee

Date: 6/4/2020 12:49:00 PM

WOW, intriguing thought and provoking at the same time. You have a spark indeed.

Georgia Kereopa

Date: 5/20/2020 6:35:00 PM

Dan, Your voice is loud, message blunt and no doubt polarising. Fresh energy and humour. I’m looking forward to being a Senior Citizen delinquent! thanks for the fun read.

Old Buck

Date: 5/28/2019 9:36:00 AM

Dan: The name for Sr. Citizen delinquent is "dementia". It's sort of fun. Everything is new and different every day. You can get in trouble and not feel like you are repeating yourself. Take it from the "Champ". oldbuck

Matthew Anish

Date: 5/13/2019 9:58:00 PM

Do you know the song that goes no,no I'm not a juvenile delinquent. This piece reminds me to that. I hope you have a lot of years before you become a dead delinquent. Yours Matthew A