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MY DECLARATION FOR THE CRIMES OF FORSAKING LOVE I am putting you under arrest, my friend Because you make the poet mad I've had enough of your cold anger and silence The vibrations you give off are very bad I'm taking control and standing on faith Because I'm married to God above Your anger can't stop me anymore Because what you display I'll never call love There's a theme to this long story And it speaks of desecration If you bully your partner when you are in the mood It will lead to her dissociation Sometimes I cannot tell reality Because all I can see is what's wrong In a weird way I believe you love me But in 11 years I never felt I belonged God is giving me a lot to think about Your love seems so convenient And I deal with such crap each passing year I wonder when you speak if you mean it Your tactics won't work on me anymore Because just like love I'm blind So il will take all that i came with And I leave you with my beautiful pride I'll shed No More tears, my darling And I'll feel no more pity or remorse I know God will always protect me And he will never let me fall off course You are under arrest, my friend Until you learn to grow up a lot more And just for the sake of all humanity I'll hold the key to your door (C) Giggles the Poet September 16, 2019 My life is just beginning and I will find the love that is seeking me. Love makes magic happen and that's all that I believe

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Date: 2/23/2023 8:22:00 PM
Wonderful poem
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Date: 12/31/2019 5:48:00 AM
I absolutely love this poem. It is an amazingly awesome poem..! :)
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Giggles The Poet Brenda Keough
Date: 12/31/2019 7:13:00 AM
Thank you Angel I appreciate your comments have a very happy new year love and hugs giggles the poet
Date: 9/18/2019 8:03:00 PM
This is a wonderful write. I agree that sometimes it's best to take the plunge instead of staying in a bad situation. God bless you and your poetry
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Giggles The Poet Brenda Keough
Date: 9/19/2019 8:13:00 PM
Thank you angel iappreciate your words
Date: 9/18/2019 7:28:00 PM
Brenda, this poem would mean so much to so many women who are almost ready to make the leap of faith. "m taking control and standing on faith Because I'm married to God above Your anger can't stop me anymore Because what you display I'll never call love" Nice one!
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Giggles The Poet Brenda Keough
Date: 9/19/2019 8:14:00 PM
God guides ny hand thank you angel i appreciate your kind words God nless

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