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Crime of Love

from
love's crime-
I witness
destruction of
life


Contest: Lanterne Frenzy Number 2
Sponsor:Ir0nic ZiNk  5/12/2017

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2017

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May 19, 2017 at 6:11 AM

Good Morning Nette. The Lanterne is in true form. It is always a marvelous format to work with. Your words tell a mini story. Although it is always sad when a love goes wrong and yes darkens life. Well done entirely. Enjoy the day.

May 14, 2017 at 4:32 PM

Very well said Nette! :)

May 12, 2017 at 4:38 PM

Unique, original and void of cliches. Perfect form. A fantastic write. As always you never disappoint.

May 12, 2017 at 9:03 AM

Nicely done Nette

Demetrios Trifiatis

May 12, 2017 at 7:55 AM

The worst of crimes! The best of writing! A 7 and good luck dear, nette! Hugs!

May 11, 2017 at 4:50 PM

If love is a crime, I plead guilty. How about you?

May 11, 2017 at 4:49 PM

totally good write :)

Charmaine Chircop

May 11, 2017 at 4:26 PM

Oh I can see a crime of passion here... So much said in few dear .

May 11, 2017 at 3:21 PM

Solid punch of a write--excellent!

May 11, 2017 at 2:52 PM

It happens all too often... terrific nette

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 11, 2017 at 2:43 PM

- So sad ... - Good luck with this great poem, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

May 11, 2017 at 2:08 PM

So few words paint a sad picture nette good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

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