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Crescent Moon

I
                                             am half
                                    of you,
                             forever not
                          really me
                      Although, I 
                  shine on into 
               the night, I am 
              not as bright 
             without you. We 
             are bond together, 
             forever with this 
              black canvas that
                enlightens it with 
                 a mass of flickering 
                    stars. We work 
                        as one. O, I  
                             hate nights
                                  when it’s just 
                                             half of me
                                                     without 
                                                               you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/8/2020 10:34:00 PM
Very creative, a special style of writing
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Date: 2/25/2019 9:18:00 AM
Lovely poem that brings to mind the beauty of nature.
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Date: 11/30/2018 8:52:00 AM
Interesting and creative. I like it.
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Christy Edgley
Date: 11/30/2018 8:53:00 AM
and it went to my fav. list
Date: 11/27/2018 4:12:00 AM
lovely loving expression on new moon shape //
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Date: 8/23/2018 10:47:00 AM
Awesome concrete poem!
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