Crescent Moon

I
                                             am half
                                    of you,
                             forever not
                          really me
                      Although, I 
                  shine on into 
               the night, I am 
              not as bright 
             without you. We 
             are bond together, 
             forever with this 
              black canvas that
                enlightens it with 
                 a mass of flickering 
                    stars. We work 
                        as one. O, I  
                             hate nights
                                  when it’s just 
                                             half of me
                                                     without 
                                                               you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Magnet Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 10:34 PM
Very creative, a special style of writing
Ifeanyichukwu Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 9:18 AM
Lovely poem that brings to mind the beauty of nature.
Edgley Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 8:52 AM
Interesting and creative. I like it.
Edgley Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 8:53 AM
and it went to my fav. list
Bangalee Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 4:12 AM
lovely loving expression on new moon shape //
Kitchin Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 10:47 AM
Awesome concrete poem!
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