Crescent

The lonely night holds new remorse like songs of old we've heard before And though the sky may know the chords tonight's moon seems to stray off course In dark tonight all eyes are blind The crescent moon, so small upturned hears strains of sadness so aligned where even stars weep sad nocturnes Please moon, become the whole you are I need your lamp to see me through Although I see one million stars this night is lonely without you So dim the light that fills the eye the falling stars have left the sky
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ For Brian Strand's Contest: 231 ___________________________________
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Gildersleeve Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 8:11 AM
Carry this is a beautiful moon poem. Congratulations on your well deserved superb win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Ryerson Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 3:13 AM
Wow Carrie...Those first two lines just knocked me dead...'so slight your smile'...you have such a unique gift of describing things like no one else I have read...Congratulations my friend - Tim
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July 14, 2013 at 10:21 PM
Carrie, congrats on your win. stopping by to say good night. LOVE *LINDA
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July 14, 2013 at 10:01 PM
congratulations WITH YOUR LOVELY WIN CARRIE, ;-) Enjoy my latest blog if you like. Always loving and enjoying the soup ~ skat ~
Delaney Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 9:44 PM
A beautifully written tribute to a Muse, as fine as I have seeM
Guzzi Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 7:48 PM
Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
March 21, 2013 at 12:50 PM
Congrats on your creative win..Sara
Jones Avatar
March 20, 2013 at 5:27 PM
Congrats Carrie. :-)
Johnson Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 5:57 PM
I like this one very much. Congratulations Carrie. Love, Joyce
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March 18, 2013 at 5:05 PM
Carrie, congratulations with your musing moon poem :-) hope your having a sweet day... always~ LINDA
Dillard Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 10:13 AM
Just like the moon, you're the brightest of them all! Congratulations on your top placing in Russell's contest. RAY
Dom Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 4:05 AM
Fantastic sonnet! First four lines are awesome and I like the final couplet. Cheers!
Ober Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 8:26 AM
This is wonderful, Carrie! The first four lines are pure gold!
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