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Creeping Roses

Tender tendrils climb the wall Up towards the sky Past the latticed windows tall Clinging on from high. Then in springtime buds in red Pout with lips apart Inhibitions they all shed And seduce my heart. ---------------------------------- Contest: A 7/5 Trochee Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Placed: 1st

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Susan Ashley

Date: 3/29/2018 4:35:00 PM

Your luscious poetry 'seduces my heart' Paul :) Such impassioned poetic lines of beauty wrap their 'tender tendrils' of sensuous imagery around my imagination like a lovely hug. Love the title as well. Superb poetry, my friend. I'm going to have to fave this lustrous gem. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 4/1/2018 8:17:00 AM

Paul, Happy Easter greetings to you and those you hold dear, my dear friend.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/1/2018 3:09:00 AM

Thank you, Susan. Glad you found these lines luscious and seducing:) As always your lovely comments are much appreciated, so is the fav! Warm wishes & Happy Easter! // paul

Funom Makama

Date: 6/8/2015 3:29:00 AM

This is adorable and extremely cute. Your soul just diffused into mine to wonderfully correlate with your message. Great work friend and thanks a zillion for visiting my page. I hope to be able to attract more of your attention. Once again this is an awesome piece of creativity. selah!

Paul Callus
Date: 6/8/2015 3:57:00 PM

Thank you Funom. Even your lovely comments are poetically transmitted! I am pleased that you found beauty in these few lines. Sahha! // paul

Sneha Rv

Date: 5/15/2015 9:31:00 AM

How lovely!! Congratulations on your amazing win!! :D :D

Paul Callus
Date: 5/15/2015 11:21:00 AM

Thank you for a lovely reaction, Sneha! Have a nice weekend. // paul

Poesy Relish

Date: 5/12/2015 10:59:00 AM

simply beautiful and deep... a7.. nad

Paul Callus
Date: 5/12/2015 12:28:00 PM

Thank you Nadiya; the lovely comments and high rating are appreciated. All the best. // paul

Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/10/2015 11:49:00 AM

This is a lovely quatrain poem, Paul. Very beautiful and passionate!

Paul Callus
Date: 5/11/2015 9:48:00 AM

Pleased that you found it to your liking, Kelly! Thank you for another lovely visit. All the best....have a lovely week. // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 5/4/2015 11:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, well deserved a 7 :~)

Paul Callus
Date: 5/11/2015 9:31:00 AM

Thank you, Eve. The high rating is appreciated. hugs // paul

Skat A

Date: 5/3/2015 9:54:00 PM

Love it Paul, Congratulations on your Trochee poem win. :) SKAT

Paul Callus
Date: 5/11/2015 9:21:00 AM

Thank you, Skat! Glad you enjoyed:) All the best...paul

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/3/2015 6:04:00 PM

Happy to welcome you back with a warm congrats, Paul! I love the pouting lips! lol! 7. Hugs! Kim :)

Paul Callus
Date: 5/4/2015 6:24:00 PM

Thank you Kim! It's nice to be back commenting, but my muse is still wandering in the wilderness! Hugs & :)))) // paul

David Fisher

Date: 5/2/2015 7:57:00 PM

Paul, this was such a joy to read and worthy of a 1st. Way to go!

Paul Callus
Date: 5/3/2015 9:14:00 AM

Thank you David. Glad you enjoyed. All the best. // paul

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/2/2015 7:55:00 PM

How lovely Paul, one of the nicest things Ive read in awhile. Congrats. BG

Paul Callus
Date: 5/3/2015 9:17:00 AM

That's very nice of you, Barbara! Thank you. Hope you're having a lovely weekend. // paul

Mohan Chutani

Date: 5/2/2015 12:07:00 PM

Paul, a perfect sensual meter for the heart. Congrats for fine win. Mohan

Paul Callus
Date: 5/2/2015 12:58:00 PM

Thank you, Mohan. Appreciate your visit and comments. All the best. // paul

Judy Konos

Date: 5/2/2015 10:07:00 AM

Velly Vonderful!

Paul Callus
Date: 5/2/2015 1:00:00 PM

Thank you velly much, Judy:) All the best. // paul

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/2/2015 9:49:00 AM

Wow, this is a good one, Paul !! Congratulations are due !!

Paul Callus
Date: 5/2/2015 1:03:00 PM

Thank you, Carrie. Hope you had a nice weekend. // paul

Joseph May

Date: 5/2/2015 9:23:00 AM

Congrats on a great win Paul

Paul Callus
Date: 5/2/2015 1:08:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph. Nice to have you stopping by. // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/2/2015 8:54:00 AM

Ahh!! Great quality work!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

Paul Callus
Date: 5/2/2015 1:31:00 PM

Hi Sara! So glad you enjoyed this write; thank you for stopping by. hugs // paul

David Mohn

Date: 5/2/2015 8:17:00 AM

Well done Paul...big congrats on this wonderful beauty!

Paul Callus
Date: 5/2/2015 1:33:00 PM

Thank you David! Lovely to be back commenting again after my short break! All the best. // paul

Archana Garg

Date: 5/2/2015 8:13:00 AM

Worth winning poen. Congrats....... Archana

Paul Callus
Date: 5/2/2015 1:30:00 PM

Thank you Archana; pleased to meet you:) All the best. // paul

Archana Garg
Date: 5/2/2015 8:14:00 AM

( something mis-spelt )Worth winning poem. Congrats....... Archana

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/2/2015 7:37:00 AM

Paul, this is so lovely and what wonderful imagery you have painted with your words. "...buds in red pout with lips apart." Exquisite! Congrats on your well-deserved solo First Place win! 7-Fav, Sandra

Paul Callus
Date: 5/2/2015 1:38:00 PM

Thank you very much, Sandra; I appreciate your lovely comments, the high rating + the fav. Lovely to be back amongst friends:) All the best. // paul

John Lawless

Date: 5/2/2015 7:20:00 AM

Well Paul all I can say is WOW!!. Excellent treatment of this tricky form and a well deserved top spot.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/2/2015 1:35:00 PM

You are very kind, John! I appreciate your lovely, complimentary comments, my friend. All the best. // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 5/2/2015 6:35:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats on your well deserved top spot Paul:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 5/2/2015 12:16:00 PM

I KNOW how that feels Paul my 2 top wins have boosted my flagging spirit:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 5/2/2015 10:53:00 AM

Many thanks, Jan! This has made my day; needed a boost:) Hugs // paul

Rob Carmack

Date: 5/2/2015 2:50:00 AM

Congrats Paul with taking first.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/2/2015 1:21:00 PM

Many thanks, Rob; appreciate your dropping by. // paul

Skat A

Date: 5/2/2015 12:40:00 AM

Hello Paul, amazing win. :) Congratulations! Forever ~SKAT~

Paul Callus
Date: 5/2/2015 1:20:00 PM

Glad that you enjoyed, Skat! Thank you for stopping by. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/2/2015 12:34:00 AM

Paul. Your trochee poem is pure perfection! I just adore the final stanza!! Congrats on your number one win. I had a hard time deciding whom to give the top spot because all the top poems were so GREAT, but you deserve this!

Paul Callus
Date: 5/2/2015 10:48:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Andrea! This is indeed a great tonic on a day when I'm feeling somewhat under the weather. I'm delighted with my top placing:) Hugs // paul

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/10/2015 10:38:00 PM

ah Andie should really like this paul. Light & love

Paul Callus
Date: 4/11/2015 4:02:00 AM

Thank you Debbie! I am pleased that you like it; hope Andrea will, too. Have a nice weekend. // paul

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/9/2015 8:49:00 AM

SEXY, Romantic and Deep. Packs a punch and a delight to read. Best of luck in that contest my fiend..A7

Paul Callus
Date: 4/9/2015 12:51:00 PM

Hi Robert! Thank you for taking a punch from my write, and for rating it high! All the best. // paul