Creek-ing

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Inland the landscape of the storm takes on another look.

The muddy water creek-ing along pines meandering, windless scene absurd, acerbic, honed.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/28/2024 8:23:00 PM

The words of this beautiful poem, bring the busy scene, vividly to life. Wonderful writing, Kim. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/28/2024 9:02:00 PM

Thank you, my friend!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/28/2024 12:30:00 PM

So much flooding has happened that it is upsetting. I hope that the end is now in sight. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/28/2024 3:48:00 PM

I feel for everyone in those flood zones. Some have lost their lives.

Paige Hind

Date: 9/27/2024 3:19:00 PM

Wow, this is truly gorgeous.... a reward to read in itself

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/27/2024 8:17:00 PM

Thank you, Paige!

R J. Elless

Date: 9/27/2024 2:17:00 PM

Kim, I hope you and yours are safe. I was on the east coast of Florida. Vero Beach, when Sandy came by. Catastrophic. Praying helps. God Bless.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/27/2024 8:17:00 PM

Glad your safe! God bless!