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Creator's Crackers

Creator's crackers bursting scene
                                       far distant lighting black red green
                                            uncountable numbers hang
                                         birth place we call the big bang
                                            all move in mother sky's lap
                                            stars planets asteroids map
                                      Creator's crackers bursting scene
                                      far distant lighting black red green


For contest:Contest: 100 in a ROW contest -- 8
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Suzanne Delaney Date: 8/2/2016 6:34:00 AM Out of chaos comes order. A brilliant lesson. Congrats on your placement. Hugs, SuZ Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 8/2/2016 11:27:00 AM Thanks my friend for your wishes. Hugs Cloudy poets,

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/30/2016 8:46:00 PM Cloudy Poet BL<3, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest --- 101 in a row. :) Stop by my blog "They Hang Horses, Don't They?" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 7/31/2016 10:44:00 AM Many thanks for your wishes. Loved always, Cloudy Poet

Skat A Date: 7/18/2013 10:20:00 PM Hi Bl, I love your star dust winning poem. Congratulations! Luv* SKAT Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 7/19/2013 8:33:00 AM Many thanks for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/17/2013 2:19:00 PM congrats for your win, BL. Very cool poem. Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 7/18/2013 8:21:00 AM A lot of thanks to you for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Sara Kendrick Date: 7/16/2013 4:42:00 PM Congrats on your creative and unique winning work...Sara Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 7/16/2013 4:54:00 PM A lot of thanks for wishing me congrats on my win, my sweet friend. Loved always, bl

Nette Onclaud Date: 7/16/2013 3:45:00 AM colorful mood and appeal, bl... cheers to you for a fantastic win... do check my blog..:) huggs Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 7/16/2013 10:10:00 AM Thanks for inspiring me to write more for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/15/2013 9:31:00 PM Well deserved win congratulations. Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 7/15/2013 11:57:00 PM Many thanks for wishing me congrats, my friend. Loved always, bl

Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/15/2013 7:07:00 PM hi Bl congrats love your poem Shadow x smiles Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 7/15/2013 11:58:00 PM Many thanks for wishing me congrats, my friend. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/13/2013 9:53:00 AM I think you are doing great imagery for this one. Must be some very interesting and colorful stars to see. and I think your form is looking great now. Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 7/13/2013 11:02:00 AM Many thanks for your inspiring comment. Loved always, bl

Nette Onclaud Date: 7/12/2013 1:27:00 PM hi bl, was passing through and saw this briefly... nice one... kindly repeat line 1 and 2 for line 7 and 8..see contest details for definiton of octelle.. all the best!..:) huggs Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 7/12/2013 11:14:00 PM Many thanks, actually this is first of this form. Loved always for your kind help. Always, bl