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Soft, simple wind go on a path that is made clear, Freshly lays anew for each breath that one appear, The subtle ripple spreads on a course that favors, Fills open space and need to flow o'er layers, Trust the virtuous man cometh and made no claim, And let wander so natures gifts remain the same, Man captures the ramble of a wayward moon, Echoes clear of its pale look melancholy tune, It lends to a trail took before of song and face, As man ambles in the real feel of its sung grace, Know, they that all the creator has caused to be, That harmony feels to express nature's beauty, Unspools and weaves a tapestry on upturn faces, Touched lips assured welcoming warm embraces. Hark, colors and the voices that have sprung forth, Verdant hues mingle a parakeet sings full of mirth, An isolated pocket of chartreuse flourish in song, Host to a colored chorus, wings, and plants, strong. Man stay the course, seasons change all the same, Look take to weather yet their life will still, remain, Patience is a human trait and the creator has none, Nature is a window and the life within hath begun, Origin of man can, of nature perhaps, of time cannot, The creator is not time, for time is what man begot, Hence man dawn themselves from their first stage, For what they have made they tempt to engage, Man, had made the time that divided the seasons, Saw patterned entities, signs guide their reasons, The mind of man is cleared of thoughts and is open, Fostering experience whereby they draw the notion, Nature goes its way, and man be a better learner, Man's grateful, the creator, not them, is the nurturer, Feeds life fairly, in momentary glances, and not stay The creator knows the outcome of creation's outlay, Location, elements, nourishment, and perpetuity, Duties of a spring's pathway, be one-way direct fluidity, Sun ray's burrow midst the waves of an open meadow, A swarm spreads butterflies unladen wings aglow. Gills causeth life to survive beneath a watery surface, Mere seeds grow and propagate into a living forest, Way of nature, man will become, reassures perpetuity, They'll assimilate, intervene, adapt nature for eternity. 2019 September 27

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Date: 2/7/2020 10:40:00 PM
Congratulations William!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 2/7/2020 11:36:00 PM
Thanks, Sam!~@wk
Date: 9/27/2019 4:32:00 PM
Nature indeed is a window and goes its own way. Beautifully written.
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Date: 9/27/2019 4:59:00 PM
My heartfelt thanks indeed ~ Aloha always William

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