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So hard....
~~~ To be faithful - when you have the lips of a Goddess

Wait..
         Eternally for our love
Like that of twin flames
                          Do not count the days
                           1
                            2
                             3 years
We shall be together soon

We are spirits that run free -++++++- through the galaxy

                                   YOU
                                remind me
                                     of what I really AM

For the contest, Creative Layouts, sponsor, Broken Wings
James Custard, 12 October
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lindsay Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 10:59 AM
Deep and meaningful - well written. ;)
A  Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 9:38 PM
James,, Wonderful win. SKAT
Cheema Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 9:23 AM
A beautiful message in this layout, James! congrats!
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 8:39 AM
I love the message in this outstanding winning poem James. Congratulations on your top win!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 4:34 AM
lovely passionate write!~Olive Eloisa
A. Sharma Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 1:05 AM
Congrats on superb win James with this wonderful creative layout and poetry!
Dietrich Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 5:52 PM
very nice one. Congrats for your win.
Inman Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 5:06 PM
Great write James, nicely done.
Callus Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 1:11 PM
The first two lines set the ball rolling, James. Very romantic. Congrats on your podium finish. // paul
Allison Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 12:12 PM
very creative James many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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