Jack Ellison Poet Quatrain

Creative Juices

Juices are flowing
Like fine red wine
Wetting my appetite
A shower of rhyme

A storm of ideas
Rain down on me
Quenching my zeal
A creative sea

Rivers of words
Relieve my thirst
Drowning in pools
Of eloquent verse

Flooding my soul
With waters so deep
Filling my reservoir
Vast oceans to reap

Juices are flowing
Like fine red wine
Wet with enthusiasm
A shower of rhyme

© Jack Ellison 2012

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Laura Breidenthal April 1, 2018 at 4:09 AM "A shower of rhyme"..."quenching my zeal" Keep the good lines coming Jack. Such talent! Always, Laura Jack Ellison April 1, 2018 at 7:42 AM What are you doing tonight dear Laura??? Maybe we could, I don't know, maybe sit, have a coffee, and... giggle for a bit!!! XOX

Jon A Cavanaugh November 9, 2012 at 5:13 AM What a delicious poem. Jack Ellison November 9, 2012 at 5:45 AM Thanks for the good words, Jon! Actually, just about to post one called, "H-Less John"! Check it out!

Carol Eastman November 8, 2012 at 8:10 PM OK... Now you've done it... You've got my creative juices flowing again. I just put up a new Troll poem. 'The Postman Cometh'. Your friend... See what you do to me? Me Oh My! Jack Ellison November 9, 2012 at 5:42 AM Heading over to check out your new one. Keep those juices flowing my dear Carol... love and hugs, Jack xox

Robert Johnson November 8, 2012 at 3:58 PM Let it rain, let it rain, let it rain. All these thoughts that you have in your brain. May we all get so wet. That we never regret. And we learn to live without disdain. Jack Ellison November 9, 2012 at 5:41 AM Very poetic response my friend... much appreciated! Have a great Friday! Cheers, Jackers

Richard Lamoureux November 8, 2012 at 12:02 PM Love it Jack, I am happy to drink this glass of fine wine, a nice change from Soup. I am intoxicated by your words. Richard Lamoureux November 8, 2012 at 8:17 PM Must be the cold Canadian air, it causes the brain cells to shiver and release creative juices which can later be turned into fine wine and other creative endeavors. Jack Ellison November 8, 2012 at 12:09 PM You have a very creative way of expressing yourself my B.C. friend! We seem to be cut from the same cloth! Thanks for the great review! Cheers, Jack

Ilene Bauer November 8, 2012 at 9:32 AM let 'em flow! this is wonderful!! Jack Ellison November 8, 2012 at 10:26 AM Thanks a bunch Ilene! Hope your day is filled with happiness and joy! Love and hugs, Jack

Sukmawati Komala November 8, 2012 at 9:21 AM Thank you So much Jack .. for your nice share am honor to read your great write ..wishing you all the best ...<3 luv SK Jack Ellison November 8, 2012 at 10:25 AM There arer so many sweet people here on the Soup and you certainly are one of them! Love ya! Hugs, Jack

Susan Burd November 8, 2012 at 8:35 AM What a way to start everyone's day! You should be first to post every morning to jump start our juices! ;)Thanks Jack! Jack Ellison November 8, 2012 at 10:24 AM You are such a sweet lady my dear Suzy-Q! You make my day every day! Big squeezy hugs, Jack

Elizabeth O'Driscoll November 8, 2012 at 6:06 AM wonderful write Jack, love elizabeth Jack Ellison November 8, 2012 at 6:17 AM Thank you Elizabeth for your kind words... much appreciated! Love and hugs, Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen November 8, 2012 at 5:30 AM It sounded so easy ..... "A storm of ideas Rain down on me Quenching my zeal A creative sea"........ - Every day new ideas Jack! - It is very well done! - oxox / / big bear hug Anne-Lise :) Jack Ellison November 8, 2012 at 6:16 AM You are always soooo kind my dear Anne-Lise... thanks a great big bunch! Love and squeezy hugs, Jack xox