Creative Juices

I have learned
to say more with less:
not that my works are noticeably
shorter—though, Lord knows
I try! But when creative juices
are flowing, my pen lifted by
currents, swept away, leaving
no rivers their banks unmarked, nor seas 
their coasts without edit, writing is   
a trans-formative force….

I think all artistic expression has
this in common: a torrent of sky;
a funnel of air elevating each new work
in defiance of gravity—redefining 
our long held beliefs of structure 
and stability; and for a blissful moment
seeming to mend that ancient rift 
between God and His earthen man….

Great art should be like this...unforgettable
as one’s first love, or one’s first epiphany
of Christ….
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 1:57 AM
You have described the flowing of creative juices really dynamically in this missive.
DiMino Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 9:57 AM
I could not tell anyone how to make great art...but, as an artist, I just sense, after a work completed (if such a thing exists, which I doubt), when I have at least made a valiant effort, and the journey was worth it. Thank you Caren.
Sergi Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 1:27 PM
Hi Joe; Beautifully descriptive poem, especially, "my pen lifted by currents". Hope to see more of you.
DiMino Avatar
April 23, 2020 at 4:49 PM
Thank you, Ralph. Have a beautiful day my friend!
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