Creation Naturally

Like the seagulls in the sky
Give me wings to fly
Over the deep blue seas
Smelling the unpolluted salty air
And emit shrill loud jubilant cries.

Like the seas frenzied dancing
Back and forth as it were doing the cha-cha-cha
 Let me move my feet to the  rhythm of the waves
Lashing onto the shore once more.

Get lost in a dense forest dressed in green
With streaks of gold highlights peeping through 
the trees.
Discovering a graceful waterfall sparkling with a rippling flow.
A stream burbles travelling over rocks and branches, cascading to the floor.

Or climb the highest mountains that wear hoodies
made of white crinkled crepe.
Tall and unmoving like one’s faith
Lifting my mind to greater heights
Unfathomable, and reach the summit of
all that I can perceive.

26.11.2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Ashley Avatar
June 3, 2021 at 6:10 PM
Dear Carol, your pen spills with beauty. Vivid imagery and emotions bring me to the center of this splendid piece. I adored the imagery of the waves doing the cha cha cha and the speaker moving their feet in rhythm with the waves.. such a free and natural dance! Congratulations for your wonderful win in Juliet's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Mitra Avatar
June 3, 2021 at 11:21 PM
Thank you dear Susan...I am so glad and honoured that you have liked my poem....much love :)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 12:11 PM
Congratulations, Carol. Enjoyed your lovely poem with great images." Like the seagulls in the sky Give me wings to fly" - beautiful opening line. Warm wishes ~ Mala
Mitra Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 6:34 PM
Thanks dear Mala....much love :)
Goldsmith Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 9:16 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. I really enjoyed it. Have a blessed day/week..................
Mitra Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 6:32 PM
Thank you dear Paula....I enjoyed writing it....much love :)
Ligon Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 6:50 PM
Thanks for entering your original poem, Carol. Beautiful imagery. This was a difficult contest to judge. Keep up the creativity.
Mitra Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 8:27 PM
Thank you Juliet....much love :)
Hamilton Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 7:00 PM
This is another beauty of a write congrats on placing again in my contest!
Mitra Avatar
January 6, 2021 at 5:37 AM
Thank you John....much appreciated.
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