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Like the seagulls in the sky Give me wings to fly Over the deep blue seas Smelling the unpolluted salty air And emit shrill loud jubilant cries. Like the seas frenzied dancing Back and forth as it were doing the cha-cha-cha Let me move my feet to the rhythm of the waves Lashing onto the shore once more. Get lost in a dense forest dressed in green With streaks of gold highlights peeping through the trees. Discovering a graceful waterfall sparkling with a rippling flow. A stream burbles travelling over rocks and branches, cascading to the floor. Or climb the highest mountains that wear hoodies made of white crinkled crepe. Tall and unmoving like one’s faith Lifting my mind to greater heights Unfathomable, and reach the summit of all that I can perceive. 26.11.2020

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Date: 6/3/2021 6:10:00 PM
Dear Carol, your pen spills with beauty. Vivid imagery and emotions bring me to the center of this splendid piece. I adored the imagery of the waves doing the cha cha cha and the speaker moving their feet in rhythm with the waves.. such a free and natural dance! Congratulations for your wonderful win in Juliet's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Carol Mitra
Date: 6/3/2021 11:21:00 PM
Thank you dear Susan...I am so glad and honoured that you have liked my poem....much love :)
Date: 5/24/2021 12:11:00 PM
Congratulations, Carol. Enjoyed your lovely poem with great images." Like the seagulls in the sky Give me wings to fly" - beautiful opening line. Warm wishes ~ Mala
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Carol Mitra
Date: 5/24/2021 6:34:00 PM
Thanks dear Mala....much love :)
Date: 5/24/2021 9:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. I really enjoyed it. Have a blessed day/week..................
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Carol Mitra
Date: 5/24/2021 6:32:00 PM
Thank you dear Paula....I enjoyed writing it....much love :)
Date: 5/23/2021 6:50:00 PM
Thanks for entering your original poem, Carol. Beautiful imagery. This was a difficult contest to judge. Keep up the creativity.
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Carol Mitra
Date: 5/23/2021 8:27:00 PM
Thank you Juliet....much love :)
Date: 1/5/2021 7:00:00 PM
This is another beauty of a write congrats on placing again in my contest!
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Carol Mitra
Date: 1/6/2021 5:37:00 AM
Thank you John....much appreciated.

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