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Creation 2

CREATION Life settled in my palm as would a faceted cloud. Ephemeral shooting stars of myriad colour jostled for position like children before a favourite teacher. “Choose me”, sparkled effervesant through my mind. I did not understand, where was God? "I am here" ,came a voice like all the cathedral choirs and yet as intimate as whisper, "this is your show. Thus creation began. open your thought widely allow the earth to be an example know the otters joy, eagles fierce flight celebration of a rising lark learn how to be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/7/2022 10:21:00 PM
a lofty recognition!
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Date: 9/9/2019 10:10:00 AM
This is lovely. So so beautiful.
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Date: 9/4/2019 3:49:00 PM
Well this otter is full of joy too!! Having found you in my inbox, how wonderful. I am here !!! So heres the thing, i barely have time for Soup. My country is aflame and has become a very dangerous place. No going out at night at all. 22 housebreaks later also compels me to stay in. Daytime I work my ass off trying to stay afloat with my plumbing. Heck, I often think of you. I cant split my energy on two field yet. Maybe later. But now Im a happy chappy otter
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Date: 6/5/2019 8:35:00 PM
Hi Patrcia: This poetic vision settled in your palm A truly beautiful imagery! Good to read you again!
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Date: 4/2/2019 11:16:00 PM
I came to see if Patricia still writes. Remember, I always read between the lines. If God is close then no need to be afraid. Im still here, only briefly so love J
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Date: 2/8/2019 11:32:00 AM
Deep thoughts, Patricia, so well expressed.
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Date: 12/18/2018 10:14:00 PM
Wow, this is so unique and great verse, Patricia! I really enjoyed the read!
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Date: 10/5/2018 11:30:00 AM
As always, Patricia, a truly delightful read...I so enjoy your unique perspectives; philosophic undertones seem to be an intrinsic quality that is present in all your poetry. Beautifully extolled! Your good friend, john :) P.s I hope you are safe and well, Patricia.
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Date: 8/30/2018 2:56:00 AM
Lovely write, Patricia:)
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Date: 8/4/2018 3:58:00 PM
"Create, in us oh GOD A NEW START I allow you to enter my heart" great verse Patricia ~~~~ James :)
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Date: 7/18/2018 1:53:00 PM
Lovely read Patricia..
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Date: 7/18/2018 8:42:00 AM
Patricia, enjoyed reading your creative Creation write. We could learn a lot from the animals!
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Date: 7/17/2018 8:51:00 PM
Lovely smile inducing read, dear Poetess. mo hugs x
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Date: 7/17/2018 6:21:00 PM
I really enjoy your poetry.
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Date: 7/17/2018 2:59:00 PM
This is so uplifting. Well done!
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