Creation

Creating is not creation... it is more, the tiger from his cage set free – the aquarium dolphin again allowed to roam endless his liquid topography – It is releasing gifts sipping from wells our thirsts divinely quenched when surfacing depths of eternity

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/6/2023 2:22:00 AM

Your imagery and arguments justify this wonderful poem.

Joe Dimino
Date: 2/6/2023 6:27:00 PM

Thank you, Victor; your perceptive comments mean a lot to me. Blessings my friend.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 2/5/2023 5:08:00 PM

Beautiful sentiments Joe, He gave us these gifts once to last for all eternity. We must learn that the wild creatures are there in their own right, not to be captured by human hands, we take the riches from the earth destroying as we do. The land wont regrow and the extinct animals won t come back. When will we learn? Your Poem is amazing Joe. A definate Favorite for me

Joe Dimino
Date: 2/5/2023 6:06:00 PM

Good question!? Doesn't seem like we have made much progress over the last couple thousand years. Blessings my friend. Thank you so much for the FAVE!

Brenda J. Joyce

Date: 2/5/2023 1:52:00 PM

Enjoyed very much

Joe Dimino
Date: 2/5/2023 6:07:00 PM

Hi Joyce; so pleased this one connected with you. Blessings!