Creating A Happy Space

Talk to me
Set your thoughts free
Find in me your peace
Know I am discreet
Show me your beliefs
Stand on them indeed
Like holy book we read
Boaz your Ruth is unique
Piercing heart so deep
And all fears do cease
Creating a beautiful unity
Faithful and filled with glee
Planted like green seed
Romantic and beautiful sweet
Feelings that never leave
Healing so much indeed
Smiles that never leave
Wild like fuchsia fantasy
Following loves true lead
Making so happy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rose  Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 6:52 PM
Following love' true lead will surely put a smile on your face and your heart too. What a lovely poem dear Karen, I am taking much delight in it, ;)
Jones Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 9:23 PM
So happy you like it Mystic Rose Rose
Goldsmith Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 11:37 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write. Happy is the best place to be. Be happy today as you write away.............
Jones Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 4:10 PM
Glad you like it Paula!
Buhagiar Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 1:51 AM
Pity no new poems. I love to read yours.
Jones Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 2:59 AM
Been busy with piano lessons and driving back and forth to help out of town family with car issues.
Mo Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 3:26 AM
I struggle creating those spaces, I have found my happy space is finding peace from people and the world. Enjoyed your poetry
Jones Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 7:14 AM
Even if you struggle with it to find your happy space is worth it! Thanks for reading!
Proxenos Avatar
April 6, 2024 at 5:05 AM
You always do create a happy space with your poetry Karen, this beautiful write is no exception. I love your first 6 lines, they describe how indeed you get to know someone, a whole lot better. i read a book about RUTH IN THE OLD TESTAMENT when I was in my early teens, it has forever left an impression on me. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Jones Avatar
April 6, 2024 at 9:43 PM
Jennifer this is the highest compliment I can receive and know that your words touch my heart! So glad you were kind enough to read and leave such kind words! Thank you!
Buhagiar Avatar
April 5, 2024 at 3:21 AM
You mentioned Ruth. It is the person I admire most in the Old Testament. Saw her film too. Great poem.
Jones Avatar
April 5, 2024 at 6:48 AM
Cool beans! I admire Ruth as well Victor! Thanks for reading.
Vipond  Avatar
April 4, 2024 at 11:28 PM
This is just a gorgeous poem from beginning to end! Cx
Jones Avatar
April 5, 2024 at 6:47 AM
I am humbled by your kind comment Cynthia
Smith Avatar
April 3, 2024 at 11:15 PM
Those who do not love children will be hard pressed to find a space that is happy and may lack a mind that is creative enough to make one in their inner space. But then again it only takes one child to adopt them to turn their world the right way up. this poem a 9 for me. Regards David
Jones Avatar
April 4, 2024 at 12:50 AM
David what a great observation and I appreciate your 9! Hoping your day is great! Hugs
Greenhough Avatar
April 3, 2024 at 11:24 AM
The oneness of twoness united the words of this poem. Friendship is loyalty. Thanks for such a wonderful work.
Jones Avatar
April 3, 2024 at 1:58 PM
Aw you are kind thank you Hilda!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 3, 2024 at 6:22 AM
Enjoyed!
Jones Avatar
April 3, 2024 at 11:26 AM
Thanks Kim!
Bell Avatar
April 3, 2024 at 3:10 AM
We all need a happy place away from negativity. Mind you, just not watching the news in the morning makes you happy.
Jones Avatar
April 3, 2024 at 3:25 AM
lol you’re correct
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