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Creating A Happy Space

Talk to me Set your thoughts free Find in me your peace Know I am discreet Show me your beliefs Stand on them indeed Like holy book we read Boaz your Ruth is unique Piercing heart so deep And all fears do cease Creating a beautiful unity Faithful and filled with glee Planted like green seed Romantic and beautiful sweet Feelings that never leave Healing so much indeed Smiles that never leave Wild like fuchsia fantasy Following loves true lead Making so happy

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/8/2024 6:52:00 PM

Following love' true lead will surely put a smile on your face and your heart too. What a lovely poem dear Karen, I am taking much delight in it, ;)

Karen Jones
Date: 4/8/2024 9:23:00 PM

So happy you like it Mystic Rose Rose

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/8/2024 11:37:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your lovely write. Happy is the best place to be. Be happy today as you write away.............

Karen Jones
Date: 4/8/2024 4:10:00 PM

Glad you like it Paula!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/8/2024 1:51:00 AM

Pity no new poems. I love to read yours.

Karen Jones
Date: 4/8/2024 2:59:00 AM

Been busy with piano lessons and driving back and forth to help out of town family with car issues.

Marugu Mo

Date: 4/7/2024 3:26:00 AM

I struggle creating those spaces, I have found my happy space is finding peace from people and the world. Enjoyed your poetry

Karen Jones
Date: 4/7/2024 7:14:00 AM

Even if you struggle with it to find your happy space is worth it! Thanks for reading!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/6/2024 5:05:00 AM

You always do create a happy space with your poetry Karen, this beautiful write is no exception. I love your first 6 lines, they describe how indeed you get to know someone, a whole lot better. i read a book about RUTH IN THE OLD TESTAMENT when I was in my early teens, it has forever left an impression on me. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Karen Jones
Date: 4/6/2024 9:43:00 PM

Jennifer this is the highest compliment I can receive and know that your words touch my heart! So glad you were kind enough to read and leave such kind words! Thank you!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/5/2024 3:21:00 AM

You mentioned Ruth. It is the person I admire most in the Old Testament. Saw her film too. Great poem.

Karen Jones
Date: 4/5/2024 6:48:00 AM

Cool beans! I admire Ruth as well Victor! Thanks for reading.

Cynthia Vipond

Date: 4/4/2024 11:28:00 PM

This is just a gorgeous poem from beginning to end! Cx

Karen Jones
Date: 4/5/2024 6:47:00 AM

I am humbled by your kind comment Cynthia

David Smith

Date: 4/3/2024 11:15:00 PM

Those who do not love children will be hard pressed to find a space that is happy and may lack a mind that is creative enough to make one in their inner space. But then again it only takes one child to adopt them to turn their world the right way up. this poem a 9 for me. Regards David

Karen Jones
Date: 4/4/2024 12:50:00 AM

David what a great observation and I appreciate your 9! Hoping your day is great! Hugs