Creamed

I really like this one, Deb. But if tomorrow was curdled, how was it also buttery and creamy? Thanks for all your comments and how nice you have Rocky! Luv, Andrea

Deborah, Wow! This really is a wonderful poem. It is so succinct, simple, and surely makes the cows come home! Tom

VERY NICE LOVED IT FALESHIA

Great ideas in simple words splash from your mind so nicely and precisely that we find only glued to them. It's a great quality my friend saying most difficult things in most simple words and is rare very rare. I remember my late Philosopher President Dr S Radhakrishnan, whose simple words used to convey deep philosophy of life. Once he wrote 'We have guns in hand, powder on face and hatred in our hearts' about modern way of living. Best wishes and love Ravindra. .D Guzzi

excellent...no words more to explain...or express....!!!

I envy and applaud your ability to inspire so much thought with such a simple message. Added to my favs.

Thanks for reading and leaving your kind comments for my work. I've asked Audrey to leave comments for me. ....Jimmy

Great write that should be in the winner's circle.. Good luck in the contest. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

A wonderful idea for double duty... an End Line Word form and contest entry.. good luck with this one Debbie... luv that title too.. thankxxx for sharing ..luv.. Linda-Marie

Kool one, Deb.! Thanks for using the end rhyme form for Brian's contest. Good luck in the contest. Smiles, Dane Ann

I like what you did with this poem. Very intresting set up....

WOW! This is awesome Deborah! Well done! Very creative and I love the 'sidelines'... bravo!

Thank you for supporting my contest Debbie.Rgds Brian

I love this creamy buttering tomorrow..Wish you and me loads of it..Charma

Hey, this is so short, but it really packs a DOLLOP. GET it heeheehee. Good luck in the contest. I want to do this one, but I fear it will take me forever. I really like this one! Luv, Andrea ps Oh, you like me, you really like me (doing my sally field impression. Is she the one who did that?)

This is a very melancholy metaphor. I hope your days get brighter. :)

Very good Deb. You maybe should think of rearranging slightly and enter as an endline. Just a thought. I like it the way it is. lol Charles

Ahh.....and the title is perfection.....melts like butter!! :)